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Visions in Violet
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Visions in Violet |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 Stirring from my sleep Into a world of dawning's hues The morning light casts shadows Of a mist in violet blues The delicate palette paints Upon the canvas of my walls Then cloaks me in a visionary shawl... Within the violet dreams I seem to drift back through the years To wonder what the world was like Before mankind appeared Was earth a private showcase Painted soft by Nature's hand As mornings broke across the ancient land? Morning has appeared And now the time has come to rise The colors that await Are matched by chilling Autumn skies The pre-dawn world of violet pushed aside by day's intrusion still serves me as escape into illusion... Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (09-28-2003 12:49 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is just beautiful and that picture is perfect. I especially liked the ending, and being drawn to the illusion, not that I believe in them anymore. Loved this Sunnyone~ |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
Stirring from my sleep Into a world of dawning's hues The morning light casts shadows Of a mist in violet blues The delicate palette paints Upon the canvas of my walls Then cloaks me in a visionary shawl... Within the violet dreams I seem to drift back through the years To wonder what the world was like Before mankind appeared Was earth a private showcase Painted soft by Nature's hand As mornings broke across the ancient land? Morning has appeared And now the time has come to rise The colors that await Are matched by chilling Autumn skies The pre-dawn world of violet pushed aside by day's intrusion still serves me as escape into illusion... this was like a kid sticking his finger in a jar of honey. No matter what you pull out, it's sweet. Beautiful imagery. I love the dawn, and you gave me an appreciation for it sitting right here. thank you. Peace, Joe |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh my goodness, Sunny!! This is one of the most beautiful paintings in words that I have ever seen!! So pretty!! Did you paint the picture, too? This is one of my favorite colors, too.....blue being my favorite. I'm keeping this one so that I won't have to shuffle to find it next time I want to read it.  Hugs, sweet lady,  Ethel |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I love this time of day especially this time of year. Beautiful pictures this painted. Thanks for sharing this lovely slice of daily life with nature as it's backdrop.  Shara~  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I just love seeing the world through natures eyes and from the little boy's heart in me and you had me dreaing into this paradise, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you do more than write lovely poetry, but also paint beautiful pictures with it, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful, I think more would like to see it......  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi BlueSerenade, and the endings are what counts, eh? Someone told me once, (another musician), that you can forget the intro, mess up the middle, but whatever you do...make sure the ending is perfect!! And some illusions are really worth believing in, my friend!!! Thank you for reading...~S~ Hi n2dmysic...(love that name, btw)...and I like the idea of sticking my finger into the jar of honey...there's a poem in that one too! Thank you for reading...~S~ Hi Ethel, and I am so happy to give you back some of the reading pleasure that you always give to me!! And thank you for the bump up...didn't hurt a bit!!! Thank you for reading...~S~ Hi SharaRose, and I love this time of year too, as the pace slows down some, and life takes on colors! Thank you for reading...~S~ Hi Noah, and don't we all have the heart of a child in us, no matter what? I know I do too, and enjoy nature this time of year, the crackle of the leaves, the colors! Thank you for reading...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
great description of a special moment... Seriously colorfull and easy to dance to. I'd give it a ten. Live like it's your last day... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sunny, my friend...I SO love the way you write. This is absolutely GORGEOUS! I tried to pick out some favorite lines, but I just love the whole thing. Hugs to you, sunnylady, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi bbent, and so nice to see you here!! So, you think it would be a good song? I thought maybe I would do a melody to it on my Yamaha... Always enjoy getting your replies...thank you so much...~S~ Hi Vicky, and you brightened my day here...afraid the sky is more grey than violet this morning, but the sun came out when I read your reply!!! Thank you, my dear friend...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now, paint another color, please...  |
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