Open Poetry #29 |
The Chase |
Marty Baird Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 90Georgia, U.S. |
Players in the game life searching for justification. Silver mussel and white paws. On what had once been a pure black coat adorned the one. The other celebrating life's first summer had hair shining with youths glow. There is beauty in the flow of their bodies as they move. One fleeing for its life. Maybe that's what their both doing? Time seems to stop and hold its breath while the saga plays out. A Saga played by all of us. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
interesting write,,,
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...a young child and an old dog...? A pleasant picture of innocence and wisdom. Welcome. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marty~ WELCOME to Passions~ This is a great write ... I saw the action~ Thanks for joining us ... you'll find many fine poets here to read and inspire you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful vision of innocence and the grandness of life, sweet friend, time is always a friend when the sun is shining! This is a radiant and gorgeous debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Marty, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your scintillating poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marty, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions Enjoyed your first post Have fun here! Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I enjoyed this. very much And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think I see racoons! I guess that's better than seeing dead people! LOL...Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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