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Sir Critic
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Sir Critic |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio 
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Sir Critic Come out; come out wherever you are Do not hide behind anonymity. You kill artists of all colors and creeds- The painter, the actor, the writer, the musician, the fashion designer and the owners of new restaurants. You attack the sensitive because you are weak and afraid. You throw your words like slashing balls of fire, not caring who you hurt and destroy. Come out; come out Sir Critic. Share your talent with the world. Paint us a Monet, become a star in the grandeur of Gregory Peck. Be a writer in the style of Hemmingway or like the Athenian philosopher Socrates. Lets hear you play an instrument, a piano, with the enchanting sound of the Great Giovanni. Play a guitar with the mesmerizing rhythm like that of the talented Craig Chaquico. Design a fashion show having your beauty paraded down a catwalk to everyone's delighted amazement. Create us a meal that is delicate to the palate and entices our senses and sends us into unbearable ecstasy. Come dear Critic Let us see your brilliant talent Share your enlightened knowledge. Are you afraid of what Sir Critic will fling your way? Will he send burning words of destruction in your direction? Ah! Sir Critic. Come out; come out wherever you are. Love Bon-Bon  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enjoyed this, Bonnie. It put me in mind [of all people]...Jack Benny. You know, I'm sure, that in order to play the violin as badly as he did...he had to know it inside out...and was an exceptional violinist. But some critics do lead me to wonder what their qualifications are, other than an acerbic tongue. Thank goodness, we don't suffer them in CA!!! We've got some mighty fine, gifted analysists in there...and I've appreciated every one! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
That little miscreant sits on my shoulder allatime....I can only write if I put a sock over his head! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ [This message has been edited by Ratleader (09-28-2003 03:17 PM).] |
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CP Junior Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 17 |
I liked your poem a lot. Your images were wonderful. Chelsea |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (shouts triumphantly with power) That's right, fight the power, you go girl! (smiles) I believe the worst job in the world is a critic, and I am dead honest when I say this, because they are just like cynics in my opinion, who waste their life analyzing others and never getting to know the beauty in themselves! (sad sigh) Being a critic is a slow way to die, dearest friend, I say either you like it or you don't in your heart, God Bless You, I pray soon the world will be without cynics and critics, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific write,, you have expressed very good facts,,, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bonnie j - very telling write, differnet than what I expected, I like it a lot... BC |
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MorninGlory Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 175Oklahoma |
Critics are right up there with Bozo the clown at the state fair.. No friends, no life.. a rotten job, but somebody has to do it. Yuck. ~ becky |
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