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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2003-09-21 06:05 PM

TWENTY OR LESS…#166

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon

Criss-crossed netting
beseeching burning desire

virulent ribbons

unconsciously whispering
unheedingly haunting

unstoppable

your domain spreading
across

my will

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

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U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-21 06:18 PM

good write,,,

Magnus

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South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-09-21 06:28 PM

another tidbit of sensuality. Well done,
Mark.

Martie

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California

3 posted 2003-09-21 06:50 PM

Mark...Such fabric as this is meant to come undone.

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-09-21 07:11 PM

(smiles) You always knit such intricate beauties, sweet friend, love the use of alliteration and sound in this, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-09-21 07:24 PM

MARK
Good one, enjoyed the read.

LeeJ
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6 posted 2003-09-22 12:13 PM

your domain spreading
across

my will
yupper, thats how it happens...a new beginning...sweetly written

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

7 posted 2003-09-22 12:16 PM

This is sensous and passionate.Like the satin covering two smoothly together, the waves slowly washing over two, the sweet light of the moon uniting two as one.

Just some thoughts, see you got me thinking again.

Crystal

passing shadows
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displaced

8 posted 2003-09-22 02:34 PM

wow...whew!

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2003-09-22 06:48 PM

Tis is a real good one, Mark. I know just that feeling, too.
Sandra

gemjop
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Pencilveinia, USA

10 posted 2003-09-26 12:22 PM

loved this one!

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2003-09-26 01:54 PM

Mark

Nice write!
Once you're in there it's hard to go anywhere else.....Then it's time to give into mutual happiness or at least it's supposed to work that way.

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~

12 posted 2003-09-26 02:03 PM

hehehe...I think this is the boy my momma warned me about.

I think I'll go home, and talk to her about it.
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-26-2003 02:04 PM).]

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