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Dream (I am Patricia's daughter)
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Dream (I am Patricia's daughter) |
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CP Junior Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 17 |
I have been keeping a journal, but this is my first poem. I just started Middle School (I am 12 years old) and my friends and I started writing poetry. You should have seen the look on Mom's face when I told her I wanted to post. DREAM (My first post) I CLOSE MY EYES AND DREAM FOR IT’S A DREAM I’LL NEVER GET I DREAM, DREAM, AND DREAM AGAIN BUT STILL I HAVE NOTHING YET THEY SAY A DREAM IS JUST A DREAM UNTIL YOU TRY AND GET IT SO I TRY, TRY, AND TRY AGAIN BUT STILL YOU DON'T SEE HOW TRUE AND DEAR YOU ARE TO ME I DON'T THINK ABOUT A CHANCE WITH YOU FOR IT'S ONE I'LL NEVER GET DON'T YOU SEE IT'S A DREAM THAT I REGRET [This message has been edited by CP (09-28-2003 09:45 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
CP - never give up your dreams, for one day they will come true... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chelsea, I have many friends who keep journals, and have been doing so for several years. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! [I've been waiting to do this for the last 24 hours!!!] Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Isn't it amazing the places we can go with our eyes closed? This is a wonderful first poem, Chelsea - Let's see LOTS more from you... Welcome to Passions in Poetry, my new young friend...  |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
You're the daughter of one of this group's most beautiful poets...easy to see that she's passed on the talent to you. It's moving, to read the work of someone as young as you, with this kind of quality. You have a future in poetry, if you choose to pursue it. I'm glad you posted this, and I hope you give us more. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Hi Chelsea! I journal also and enjoy knowing that there are more people doing the same. I enjoyed reading your poem and I understand at times that it is scary to dream or even hope. So I am sending thoughts your way for your life to enfold in beautiful ways and your dreams to be realized. This is a splendid poem and shows much talent. I'm hoping to see more of your writng very soon and want to tell you that this is one very impressive first post. Welcome to PiP! Shenachie |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello CP....Welcome to Passions! It's wonderful that you are writing poetry at such an early age...and writing it so well. I look forward to seeing more.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hi Chelsea, I can just see the look on your Mom's face when you told her that, and I think you are on your way toward a future that is fun! Welcome to a gentle place... Hope you continue your adventure. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Chel, I am so proud of you. I wish Passions was around when I started writing at your age. But the personal computer wasn't even around then...Gosh, I am so old. This is the place where you belong. READ, child, and learn from the greats so that you will grow in your work! I am so proud of you! Mom |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Passions! I love your DREAM, very nice first post. It's quite natural that you should be gifted too with a Mom like yours, whose poems we love so very much. Great decision to write poetry! Love, Margherita |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hi Chelsea! Great first post! My name's Duncan. I'm the resident porch puppy. Sunshine and the others keep me tied up here most the time because I tend to chase cats, cars and other fun stuff when they don't! Hope you like it here and thanks for sharing your poetry with us.  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear CP, Don’t ever be afraid to go after any and all such dreams that you so desire. And never ever feel undeserving of such dreams. For in life, as you will soon find out. The only person who can prevent all things wonderful from becoming your reality... is yourself... Welcome to Passions! And give your dear mother a big hug for us, and tell her she did very well! Like all the rest of us, I got a feeling she’ll tell you, you did too! Richy |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
CP: Congratulations on your first poem/first post.Good composition here, and a very good ending...keep up the good work....ice |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Hello! this is a wonderful write and I am glad to be able to read it...I look forward to more poetry from you! Great to have you here  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
excellent writing, very impressive for one your age! keep it up...and you will get better and grow with age and time! Your Mom as I can clearly see she is and should be, is so proud of you...as we all are. I hope to see more from you in the near future. But if you chooses not to continue to post, then keep your journal. That is a good thing, and will help you as you go through life! take care. Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
welcome to passions...i started writing when i was about 12...keep up your journal...it is nice to go back and read it to see where you were and where you are...and don't ever stop writing...it frees our souls and our hearts...welcome again...helen |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well -- as if we needed more proof than Nan and Martie that writing can run in a family....now we can rest our case. Nicely done, little lady -- you've charmed us all. Of course now you HAVE to send more, you do know that, don't you? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Chelsea  WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY  I've been waiting for you to get on here!! I know that your Mom is proud of you. I am, too!! This is a wonderful first post. I really do look forward to reading more of your poems. It's really great that you're writing poetry. I kind of knew when your Mom told us that you and your sister were reading some of the poems, that you would be posting soon.  Youknow what else? I like that you wrote a poem about dreams. I love to write about dreams, too. Oh, my name's Ethel. Hugs to you and your Mom (and your sister, too!!)  Ethel...... garysgirl |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
welcome we have a lot of people here that you might like It's nice to know someone related to patriciaAnd the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome 2 Passions good write, keep it up bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
wonderfully done, young 'un. It's good that you can see that some dreams can lead to regret. Not the kind that you wanna' hang onto. keep up the writing Peace, Joe |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Chelsea, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we are all sooooooooo proud of you and so happy you're here as just as your mo tells you always, all your dreams can come true as long as you follow your heart and show a smile! (smiles) This is a gorgeous debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Chelsea, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much, you truly are gifted and special to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Hi... I remember when I was a little girl..I would be sitting in my room writing everything I felt down on paper. Little did I know it would lead me to this point where just about 2 years ago I started writing. My little girl years was another lifetime ago so that should tell you I'm gettin' old. So I am glad to see you writing so early. Poetry is a beautiful thing. It's an extension of yourself, and a gift given to your spirit within. (you'll know what that means a little later) Your first post was amazing. It captivated me all the way through. I couldn't stop reading. Thanks for sharing, and congrats on embarking on this lierary adventure of your life. Words will get you far in life when used well, and that you did. Words can make you soar! Beautiful!!! Celebrate life!!Best of luck in all your endeavours,  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hmmmmm 12 you say? well the insight into dreaming and of regret due to a dream is expressed here in a way that would have someone think you were older than 12.. posting... writing... of the two.. writing is more important, but the posting and the feedback you can get..the assurance that others understand the things you express is comforting at times.... I hope you continue to share with us here...and to write... much to explore with words...and much to learn... for all of us. welcome to PIP.... sorry I missed this and am late with a reply... somedays as they say are diamonds and some days are rust... my mind of late has followed the model of rust... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I don't think we need to tell her that youth has wisdom...she probably already knows. And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Hi CP! Welcome to the Passions family! What a wonderful first post...and you're only 12! WOW!! I'm so pleased your mom showed you the way here. Have her give you a big hug from all of us here! I know you will enjoy it here and I look forward to seeing more of your writing. Yes..do keep writing in your journal..it really helps! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Welcome to passions  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Chelsea, I am absolutely thrilled to see you posting here at Passions! I feel as tho' I already know you through the wonderful things you have passed on to me thru' your terrific Mom and Poetess! Your warm comments have been inspiring me to write more poetry with the younger reader in mind. Another thing that I would like to comment on is this, young people like you and your friends getting together to write poetry, fills me with joy! Our world needs more of its youth expressing the soul of a poet. Wars would cease, people loving people, more honoring of nature, spiritual growth and harmony. God bless you and your friends. It is people like you who will make this world a better place. Have fun with your writing and I look forward to reading your words, Dear Chelsea! I enjoyed your very first posted poem!--and it is copyrighted!  ~ It appears that the plum didn't fall far from the Poet Tree! Loving hugs! & congrats on taking the plunge! Earth Angel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Chelsea, here's a little  so that more Pipsters get to know who you are! For the love of poetry! EA |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is great.You have an endearing talent that flows from within.Welcome to Passions.I look forward to reading more from you. Crystal |
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