Open Poetry #29 |
The fourth month of silence |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
June Never could imagine summer nor lifetime without you clung still unaware of pending twist of fate September The silence spell you cast nurses now instead of injure by some black magic limbo it seems as if we never were ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
gemjop - I know the silence only to well. I know of these words you write... BC |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well... there are fools, and then again, there are FOOLS..... seems you met one, or else wrote this excellent poem well enough to, uh, fool us.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Been there, done that don't like the silent spell. Good poem. Bon-Bon |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The four months of silence are heavy weight .... but as you say you seem to lift that weight off your shoulders. Great write! Love, Margherita |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wow 4 months is such a long time !!!i can imagine how you feel ... Silence truly hurts Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I want some of what you are having!! I will get back to you on that black magic thing on the 16th... Susan |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
we heal slowly but surely And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) September too has always been my sadest month, sweet friend, for when I was a boy I always had seizures and nightmares at this time of year and also almost ended my life until I turned to God! (sad sigh) I guess seeing the flowers wither and animals go into hibernation is what depresses me sometimes this season, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way that soon April will come again and sprout true new love forever and it will be forever spring, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Gemma- I know the silence all too well, and you have put it into words better than I could have ever thought. This is a great write. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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