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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Found you in a song tonight one I'd never heard Spaghetti western plays upon screen father in sleep he snores Waking in the moments gun shot looking like a child Cat's weaving through the hallway feet that miss the stone cold upon bare feet killing time alone Found you in a song tonight one I've never heard Pouring wine for mother she's drained another glass pirouetting playful always makes her laugh laughter upon warm eyes watching house and home I found you in a song and kept it to myself curled among my fathers feet with my head upon mothers heart ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
gawd daaaaaauhhhhhhhhaaaaaammm...lol..yeah what I said  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
gemma? This is...so...TRUE. I found a bit of "home" in this. I leave smiling with the recognition that yes, someone else knows... thank you.  (and the last two lines? marvelous emphasis of the entire theme.) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem? you just WROTE a song seriously put this to music please here is the refrain: I found you in a song and kept it to myself Beautiful lines just amazing xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Gemma, I agree with Sue ever so much about making this into a song, sweet friend, glimpses of your mother and father fill your heart here along with all the other visions that captivated each moment from the TV screen and living room, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-27-2003 08:00 PM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
 thankyou. you know this actually was written as a song, i'm no good at it, but yes, it did come from me singing in my head (and out loud)  I do actually like this one, it makes me appreciate my odd little family set up. ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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