bubblegum and diesel whine (a tired vintage)

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Open Poetry #29

bubblegum and diesel whine (a tired vintage)

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-09-27 06:49 PM

some mornings
the smells of the
bubble gum factory
down the street
drift into the warehouse
and for a moment
i lose myself
in dreams of yesterdays
its innocence and hope
until the deisel
from a backing rig
wakes me back to reality

concrete and rafters
is this all i am?

this is CRAP..pure drivel but getting this out of the way i was able to write the other one..but oooooooooooh this SUCKSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (09-27-2003 07:22 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-09-27 06:53 PM

is exactly how I feel when I hear the traffic outside my window, Raph . . .
and no, your not . . .
xxoo

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2003-09-27 07:01 PM

nope.

I thought you were raph, not rafter? ha

sorry, was watching good, bad and the ugly on tv, wasn't being ignorant.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-09-27 07:08 PM

You are concrete and rafters.... and all that they can contain. You're also the space outside and what it can contain, if you choose to be.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-09-27 07:08 PM

thanks Sue time will tell

Gem the good the bad the ugly..ironically a perfect description of me

Ed thanks

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (09-27-2003 07:10 PM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2003-09-28 04:18 AM

I know this feeling too, Raph...
and what Sue said...you are more.

Hugs to you, my friend..
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-09-28 04:26 AM

gotta love the smell of bubblegum

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