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Night Skies |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Stirring me deeply, this sight as a lover’s moon rose behind the seaward shore. Each passionate step, each sensuous sway bringing my eyes more intently upon her. A silhouette of femininity, crystal pure, as the moon’s rays flowed through her hair. Let not the sun rise, nor the moon set. For of this I wish to rest eternally in slumber until her soft lips lightly brush mine and a cascade of stars fall from the night skies.. |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Here it is.....the best compliment I can offer another.....I wish I had written this! Larry |
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cuda04 Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 46Wisconsin,USA |
I wish someone had said this to me! Always look forward, never look back, dreams are much more refreshing than regrets. |
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LiquidMidnight Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 50 |
Wow, very sensual yet romantic at the same time. I like the cascading effect of the last couple of lines. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Barry, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, may shooting stars and comet tails always cascade through her tears and eyes where you find comfort and love forever! (big hugggsssssss) I love the magic of this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry...So lovely! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Good one a keeper.  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific,,, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Excellent...such a beautiful way to say it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Barry, you sing beautifully . . . *smile* xxoo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
You make a girl feel perty, ya know..Lovely to read. Shara~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Beautiful and passionate. Jason |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
ah . . . the light touch of lips |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
watch it there young man...I am easy to be swept away lately |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ One great big Florida ~SIGH~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - darn, you romantic you... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Are you sure you didn't mean shaken, not stirred? Wonderful poem, Sir.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I love when your romantic side speaks. A soft and lovely poem, Barry. Patricia |
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