Open Poetry #29 |
GRANDPA,YOU’RE SO SMART... |
n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
Inspired by the innocent questioning of my Granddaughter Aurea Marrie, who asked Grandpa "where does the wind come from, the sun and moon breathing?" dedicated to my Grandchildren: Lance Joseph, Landen Richard, Aurea Marrie, Kailee Jean, and Faith Marrie. Grandpa...? If there can be nothing, where does it begin Where does big start, and why can’t infinity end Why is color color, and why do rainbows bend What makes the darkness not the light and what makes the darkness come with the night How does God see if He has no eyes, and if God can do anything, can He tell lies How did the heavens God arrange If an orange was blue, that would be strange Why do birds sing in flight and how do we know that left isn’t right And why is an apple not a pear and how come there is different colored hair Where does the wind come from, and where does it go? Grandpa, you’re so smart, cuz of everything you know. from the big MT |
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Fariegirl Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 147 |
I really liked this, it reminded me of my grandfather. God rest his soul. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
No easy answers are there~ Really loved reading your thoughts Joe~ |
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Sunshine
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How well you've tugged the hearts of all...this is wonderful...and more than that, it's a |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
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Enjoyed,,,
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
precious.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awwww makes it worth it all doesn't it! Shara~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is a masterpiece.. I think because of the true innocence kids have and you said it so well. It reminded me of my little Gram and at the same time my own children. This deserves an award Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
thank you all for the kind remarks. My Grand Ones rule the earth. Peace, Joe from the big MT |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
This was a beautiful rainbow of questions, i admit am still asking! I've never had a grandpa, or grandma, so they and you are so lucky, and it makes me smile to see you show yoour love of them here. your granddaughter is showing signs of being a poet no? "where does the wind come from, the sun and moon breathing?" beautiful! I love this, sentimental, honest, full of colour and lifes mysteries! ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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Sunshine
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