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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Tell me that you love me in the language of my body. Let the motion of your fingers be the words. Whisper to me in a breath that holds meaning in its texture. Pause...as if the weight of silence presses hard across the soul. Tell me that you love me in the language of my body. Then listen... As I tell you...in the language of your own. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh yes, Eric...nothing like the body language of two people in loveeeee!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well, ok.....you're sure about this? ....sorry.... nice pome, mon! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Fair trade-off I'd say. I like the language approach....enjoyable read! Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
the best things are said without words... hot :-) "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
thought this was to be a tutorial on speaking. Very good. Nice imagery. Peace, Joe in the big MT seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, may you forever share the language of the doves and butterflies and fall deeply in love all over again every day, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
darn...I wish I had written this one too! Nicely done. Larry |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhEric~ You waltz the words so temptingly~ This is marvelously sensuous~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh...this is so beautifully sensual, Eric. How could anyone refuse such an invitation?  Hugs to you, friend, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
i think this is one of your very best here eric, sensual, with even deeper meanings behind the already deep words! your talent shines always ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Divine invitation, dear Eric! Your universal language of love touches deeply. I hear the Angels sigh .... I love you. Margherita |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is wonderful, Eric. I have missed reading you...had gotten so busy with work and home. I am glad for this day to slow down and read, and I am glad you were here. Patricia |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
But..but do I hafta...? hehe...This was so sweet. WOW. What a loving thing, just sweet as can be!  for you and your body buddy!Shara~  Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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