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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2003-09-27 09:43 AM

Jezebel Eyes
~*Marge Tindal*~

Scalding cries from Jezebel eyes
full the tears-in-shed
Strange how heartache comes around
when another turns his head~

He looks with eyes that plainly see
the termagant that you are
Scarlet is the letter etched
in his visions now from afar~

Yours were eyes of idolatry
for one not willing to wear your wrath
Dry the eyes Mz. Jezebel
another victim soon will cross your path~

Smile a smile ... puesdo-sincere
let the light dance in your Jezebel eyes
Rememember to keep equal footing this time
so as to lofty pedestals of praise
this one will not rise~

*Sometimes (if you're lucky) it's just a POEM*
Brought to you, courtesy of that impish little dark muse, Blesaka~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-09-27 09:48 AM

The language that you use to catch such a powerful emotion is beautiful Marge.
Eric

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2003-09-27 10:21 AM

Wow! Marge this one really packs an intense whallop!!

Good writing!

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

Marty Baird
Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 90
Georgia, U.S.

3 posted 2003-09-27 10:39 AM

You've done a nice job of catching the essence of this individual from the Bible.

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

4 posted 2003-09-27 10:47 AM

this lady has caught me a few times, to my dismay ;-} good write. Peace, Joe

seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-09-27 03:50 PM

I certainly appreciate the comments from you all~
It's such a pleasure to be a poetess and be able to share~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2003-09-27 06:17 PM

Oh My, this is wonderful. I like your darker muse.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

7 posted 2003-09-27 06:24 PM

Ooh, this is a tricky one to read - layered and layered with meaning.

I like this - it's a different kind of voice from the one I'm used to hearing.

Hugs!

Corinne

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2003-09-27 07:14 PM

Kethry & Corinne~
Two of my favorite ladies, I thank you both~

Yes, that little Blesaka sneaks one in on me every now and again~

I SO appreciate you gals reading this one~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Betty
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

9 posted 2003-09-27 09:53 PM

Marge I really like this one.
Love,
Betty

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

10 posted 2003-09-27 10:25 PM

Dear Marge: Jezebels usually do get their just desserts, in time! Great poem!

Betty Lou Hebert

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

11 posted 2003-09-27 10:43 PM

Now see, it has always seemed to me that Jezebels just got desserts.

An interesting write. I have met this lady many times in many guises.

I hope you don't mind me commenting, even though I'm not one of the gals.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2003-09-28 08:57 AM

Oh boy !
A double-dose of Betty's and one sweet IceBox~

I appreciate the reads, the sweet replies and send *Huglets* in return~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

13 posted 2003-09-28 10:53 AM

Yep. I think we all have met this Jezebel a time or two. In fact I have two poems about this jaded hearted person. I have one that I will post it's called, Romeo has a horse called Jezebel.
Good one
Bon-Bon

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2003-11-25 01:19 AM

Thanks Bonnie~
It's a strange shade of green that glints in the eye of a Jezebel, for sure~
Sincerest *Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

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