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aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

0 posted 2003-09-27 06:59 AM

you ripped my heart out
and left me here to bleed
so much gone now
i can hardly see

i had you on a pedastool
and i thought i was in love
but you knew you had
found your fool

y is it you chose me?
y me out of every girl in the room
why??? because .....
you thought i would be easy
after a few drinks???
because im the quiet one
over in the corner
there is just one more thing
that i must ask....
WHY DID YOU HAVE TO CHOOSE ME?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2003-09-27 09:05 AM

Yum!....why NOT you?

...sorry, couldn't resist a little Vonnegut imitation...I know the other half of this feeling, and I can assure you it's the same for a man -- even one who's long past his teens! I like this little poem -- will look for more of yours.

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dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

2 posted 2003-09-27 11:22 AM

Hi Aussie Teen! I liked your poem...look forward to seeing more.
My mother is Australian...maybe that's why I say WELCOME!
Larry.

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

3 posted 2003-09-27 11:26 AM

because life ain't fair, but your expression is more than. Peace, Joe

seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2003-09-27 12:00 PM

You sound young so I hope you learn by this mistake ..... or hope he gives you the answers when you ask why ???

Hope
P.S I am an Aussie too , I am over in the West

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-09-27 01:04 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Melissa, sadly these unfortunate circumstances occur but know now you are stronger and you will truly find one who will respect and love you with heart! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

6 posted 2003-09-27 01:41 PM

Very good write! I'm sorry for your pain. Sincerely, Sauni

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

7 posted 2003-09-27 03:22 PM

I know how this is...

The whole "y" instead of "why" thing kind of threw me off, though. Other than that I enjoyed this

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I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
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aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

8 posted 2003-09-28 08:14 AM

thankyou all for the replies...
thankyou for the hugs and thankyou for the sincerity....

HopeS will try to contact ya.... by the way i am very young.... 15 in fact
Larry... well thats probly y you have to say welcome....
joe noah sauni and koko thankyou all again for the compliments.

this is me.... like it or not....
its who i am!

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