Open Poetry #29 |
Lovecalled |
James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
you come to me uncalled unbidden drawn by love alone alone I come to you soul naked the call of your love my only guide silent irresistible |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Lovely. So unconditional! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Another fantastic write from you! Sincerely, Sauni Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very nice whispers...h |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
The words 'soul naked' just captivated my reading here...this is truly beautiful, and written with such a tender touch! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie....this is very appealing! |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
simply wonderful! Peace, Joe seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo sweet, dearest friend, and may your heart keep on giving and receiving unconditionally and embrace the light of love every day! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Love can hear a voice unspoken Offers comfort to a heart broken Love travels its path on faith alone A call unanswered, it can't condone It does its best, then slips away Unless it hears a plea to stay But it's not gone, it just stays hidden Till it again appears unbidden There's no choice but to answer call If it could ignore, it's not love at all. Sorry, my friend... I know some people object to poetic responses... I hope you're not one of them... However inadequate, those lines reflect what your words made me feel. *S* I enjoyed your poem immensely! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
love it muchly oh yes I do |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Wow, Suthern! You ought to post that -- too good to be a sidelight in a thread. |
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