Open Poetry #29 |
Lingering Melodies Of Love |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lingering Melodies Of Love ~*Marge Tindal*~ Expertly the fingering lingers long after the loving tune Soft the hum of gentle strum Babe, you play me oh, so well Can you tell ... I love what you do ? ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...I hope he can tell...I sure can! |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is ~HOT~ Marge. Love it! Betty |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I bet he can tell. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I'm smiling big here...you wouldn't believe what I wrote today...or...perhaps you would. You and I are on the absolute same wavelength... right down to the lingering fingers. And?...the title of mine is 'Play Me...'. Love this, Marge. Hugs, ~Me When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-26-2003 10:02 PM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Awwwwww! This is so special. I hope he appreciates how much you love him. Computer all fixed! Hooray!!! Hugs and Smiles, Marti Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, OH MY, |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Goodness, Marge, that was incredible! As always! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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LiquidMidnight Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 50 |
I really liked this poem for special reasons. I'm a professional bass player and I've come to realize that people are very obsessed with my hands. It's a psychological relation to the sensuality of creating art and then using those hands in an intimate encounter. Last week I was watching a show on Oxygen (Yeah, I'm a guy and I watch Oxygen. Hey, I'm secure in my masculinity :p ) in which a lady spoke about hands being sexual objects. She made an analogy of someone making a business deal on the phone with his hands, and then those hands being all over her later that night. Wow, guess Freud* was right. It all relates back to sex. *LOL* *Liquid is really a Jungian |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Bill is sooooooooo lucky, but then I guess you are too! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Marge...James |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh, he does know....be assured of that. No way he couldn't. Guitar is the instrument of love, you know. No accident that it's shaped like a woman's body. It's easier to play, but that's how fantasies tend to be....though unlike a woman, it does leave a man with calluses.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge - lovely, as you do... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sweet lingering sounds conveyed very lovingly by you, dear Marge. Hands ARE magical instruments, sharing divine gifts indeed! Love, Margherita |
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CP Junior Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 17 |
I loved your poem. It was lovely. Chelsea |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
well if he can't after this, then he never will! this is so beautiful...but then again your work always is! love the presentation and feel! take care. Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
marge...my p's p...i do so love this...helen |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
oh to be the instrument of love in the hands of a master player. Beautiful |
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