Open Poetry #29 |
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Lingering Melodies Of Love |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
Lingering Melodies Of Love ~*Marge Tindal*~ ![]() Expertly the fingering lingers long after the loving tune Soft the hum of gentle strum Babe, you play me oh, so well Can you tell ... I love what you do ? ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...I hope he can tell...I sure can! ![]() |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is ~HOT~ Marge. Love it! Betty |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I bet he can tell. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I'm smiling big here...you wouldn't believe what I wrote today...or...perhaps you would. ![]() You and I are on the absolute same wavelength... right down to the lingering fingers. And?...the title of mine is 'Play Me...'. ![]() Love this, Marge. Hugs, ![]() ~Me When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-26-2003 10:02 PM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Awwwwww! This is so special. I hope he appreciates how much you love him. Computer all fixed! Hooray!!! Hugs and Smiles, Marti Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, OH MY, ![]() |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Goodness, Marge, that was incredible! As always! ![]() Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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LiquidMidnight Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 50 |
I really liked this poem for special reasons. I'm a professional bass player and I've come to realize that people are very obsessed with my hands. It's a psychological relation to the sensuality of creating art and then using those hands in an intimate encounter. Last week I was watching a show on Oxygen (Yeah, I'm a guy and I watch Oxygen. Hey, I'm secure in my masculinity :p ) in which a lady spoke about hands being sexual objects. She made an analogy of someone making a business deal on the phone with his hands, and then those hands being all over her later that night. Wow, guess Freud* was right. It all relates back to sex. *LOL* *Liquid is really a Jungian |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Bill is sooooooooo lucky, but then I guess you are too! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Marge...James |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh, he does know....be assured of that. No way he couldn't. Guitar is the instrument of love, you know. No accident that it's shaped like a woman's body. It's easier to play, but that's how fantasies tend to be....though unlike a woman, it does leave a man with calluses.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge - lovely, as you do... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sweet lingering sounds conveyed very lovingly by you, dear Marge. Hands ARE magical instruments, sharing divine gifts indeed! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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CP Junior Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 17 |
I loved your poem. It was lovely. Chelsea |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
well if he can't after this, then he never will! this is so beautiful...but then again your work always is! love the presentation and feel! take care. Amy ![]() "love is like a butterfly-- |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
marge...my p's p...i do so love this...helen |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
oh to be the instrument of love in the hands of a master player. Beautiful |
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