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Tidal Wave
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Tidal Wave |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
I searched for strength to resist this tide Till my desires, all draw me under |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
ejoyed,,, |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Nicely done! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sounds like you got caught in a rip. Powerfully written! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
oooooh this moved me, a gentle wave of emotion. VERY nicely done. a keeper! ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
a shore kissed by sea |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Robert!  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!! Eric |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Robert, very good writing  Hugs  Ethel |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
this was neat! good job! "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
Robert - very nice. I like brief poems. A whole lot out of a little. Peace, Joe in the big MT seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Robert, this is so very lovely, sweet friend, desires can be both good or unfortunate, but if we follow our heats, we should find beauty through desire! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
much said here in few words |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Robert darling man, you see I sought you out and voila I KNEW I’d love it. How elegantly you compress your thoughts into such a perfectly telling poem. Those who really know me, know that I can’t even compress my words into a pithy reply, I’ve tried, oh believe me I’ve tried and never do I succeed. Oh well hopefully you’ll forgive me my inability to keep even a reply short, and bless my eyes with more of your delights. Love and warm stuff Big hugs Mushy  Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes it happens like that...and good thing it does |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Loved this Robert. I'm so glad I found it. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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