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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2003-09-26 04:33 PM


I searched for strength
to resist this tide
Till my desires, all
draw me under



© Copyright 2003 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-26 06:26 PM


ejoyed,,,

                                                       

icebox
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in the shadows
2 posted 2003-09-26 06:28 PM


Nicely done!
Kethry
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3 posted 2003-09-26 06:46 PM


Sounds like you got caught in a rip. Powerfully written!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



gemjop
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4 posted 2003-09-26 06:52 PM


oooooh this moved me, a gentle wave of emotion. VERY nicely done.

a keeper!

~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~  Neil Young

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2003-09-27 01:49 AM


a shore kissed by sea

Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-09-27 07:27 AM



Robert!


Ericc
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7 posted 2003-09-27 09:53 AM


Wow...!!
Eric

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8 posted 2003-09-27 10:18 AM


Robert, very good writing  
Hugs  
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-09-27 10:22 AM


this was neat!  good job!

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

n2dmystic
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beyond the doors of perception
10 posted 2003-09-27 10:25 AM


Robert - very nice. I like brief poems.  A whole lot out of a little.  Peace, Joe in the big MT

seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
11 posted 2003-09-27 03:16 PM



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12 posted 2003-09-27 03:56 PM






(big hugggssssss) Oh Robert, this is so very lovely, sweet friend, desires can be both good or unfortunate, but if we follow our heats, we should find beauty through desire! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

hoot_owl_rn
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13 posted 2003-09-27 07:13 PM


much said here in few words
Marsha
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14 posted 2003-09-29 02:36 PM


Robert darling man, you see I sought you out and voila I KNEW I’d love it. How elegantly you compress your thoughts into such a perfectly telling poem.

Those who really know me, know that I can’t even compress my words into a pithy reply, I’ve tried, oh believe me I’ve tried and never do I succeed. Oh well hopefully you’ll forgive me my inability to keep even a reply short, and bless my eyes with more of your delights.

Love and warm stuff
Big hugs
Mushy

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

passing shadows
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15 posted 2003-09-30 02:09 AM


sometimes it happens like that...and good thing it does
Suetang
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16 posted 2003-11-16 01:18 AM


Loved this Robert.  I'm so glad I found it.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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