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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-26 02:20 PM

Look

I stand with
my face on
the glass
banging against
the pain
standing like steel
crumbling like foil
screaming
.
.
.
wait

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-09-26 02:50 PM

owie

don't do that!

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

2 posted 2003-09-26 02:59 PM

See

Lost
in full view
the pane
of invisible
barriers
that we see
only through
our own eyes
. . .
bang bang
we shadow box

(sorry for your pain, dear lady)

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-09-26 03:01 PM

This hurts and i've been there.May the apin soon be replaced by peace and calmness.

Crystal

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-09-26 04:21 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Wait...look up...there is a light shining for you as bright as murano glass reinforced! (sigh) I send many angel healing hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

5 posted 2003-09-26 04:49 PM

Wowzer! What a sharp image....pain and foil....enjoyed this muchly.
thanks...thanks!
Larry.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2003-09-26 05:31 PM

Do I ever understand!!!! Excellent, powerful write!

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

7 posted 2003-09-26 06:21 PM

Hmmm...I see that home study course on the virtues of patience needs a little more work.

This is a very clearly stated point of pain. I hope you resolve this soon.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-09-26 10:05 PM

sighs

alisa
Member

since 2003-08-20

Posts 70
Florida

9 posted 2003-09-28 12:00 PM

wow!! this is a great one..

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

10 posted 2003-09-28 01:21 AM

So easy to see the little girl in this. I feel for her, and this little poem of her and you, makes me wish her wish. The one she's really making.

~~J

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