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Freinds: The Memories Of The Past (Old One)
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Freinds: The Memories Of The Past (Old One) |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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Friends turned unknown, Form abandoned sides Forever changing world explored, ageing over time Grown into old, still togetherness existed in mind An experienced past dreamt, peaceful thought repeated Memories unfolded, drained happiness once foretold Danced by riversides, golden fields explored, knee high grass Brushed against skins, absorbed summers air breathed in. Preyed on souls, laid bounded, grass tangled flesh Sprinkled dust, thickened air, sounded alert Footstep soon heard, crushed particles to soiled earth. The game, Hide and seek, a childhood joy Wondering hands, scratched skin, Blooded bladed grass Touched lump, hidden away, covered in blankets Made of nature, brought to life by a child’s mind. Awoken wide-eyed, memory emptied away Sweat covered face, lasted evidence, dried Dreamt world died, a forever ended game. Past life vanished, present day remains Death of childhood friends, reconnected Thoughts cry tears, the grief submerged. Closed eyed body, Drowned By Flooded memories Rots to dusted air, at last set free from this earth Swarmed essence, breezed to heavens gate. Lee Hepworth |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Lee, this is so very well-written but heartaching, sweet friend, it is sad to lose so many childhood friends, and even sometimes hear the tragic stories of children, and then feel yourself aging too and do the best you can to hang onto that innocence you have left so you can recover the memories! (wipes tears) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, I send many angel hugs your way to comfort the pain, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Lee, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-21-2003 03:25 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahhh Lee . . here you have reminded me of the days when it was OK to come back home when the streetlights went on . . . sad, yes . . . seems so fleeting, yet ingrained nice writing xxoo |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice writeing,,, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ A poignant penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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