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Open Poetry #29

Leafy Season

Jack- In- The- Green
Junior Member

since 2003-09-11

Posts 31
The green woodlands.

0 posted 2003-09-26 06:31 AM

Air where the bloom was;
Showers where the turf was;
clouds like cotton wool,
streams full
darkening skies where the Kestrel was.

No amber for your crown;
No heat within your gown,
beneath the bramble,
your spectre, where your countenance was.

Melancholy gales, where your utterance was;
Grief, so much grief where my heart was;
you ever with me,
your eyes ever with me;
silence where hope was.

Have you seen jack-in -the green he taps his cain on the ground and signals the snowdrops it's time to grow.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2003-09-26 06:40 AM

Jack I enjoyed this poem, are you sad?
it was beautifully descriptive and powerful.
Don't be sad, life is full of so much beauty and love.

~ARH

Jack- In- The- Green
Junior Member

since 2003-09-11

Posts 31
The green woodlands.

2 posted 2003-09-26 06:45 AM

Thank you lady....you are a kind person to reply to my poem....yes i was a little sad..but hope brings me round...

Jack.

Have you seen jack-in -the green he taps his cain on the ground and signals the snowdrops it's time to grow.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-09-26 07:02 AM

this was an astoundingly beautiful read...very deep feelings and yes, sad, and yet somehow there are many visions of hope refecting in your words. Beautifully bittersweet and emotional. Wishing you a better day today, and may goodness and light touch your heart, soul and mind. Love to you and yours.

Jack- In- The- Green
Junior Member

since 2003-09-11

Posts 31
The green woodlands.

4 posted 2003-09-26 07:07 AM

Lee J thank you for your very kind words being like a creature of nature i am never sad for very long..i just look at what nature has to offer me ..the trees and birds...and the seasons..and how can i be sad?

Jack.

Have you seen jack-in -the green he taps his cain on the ground and signals the snowdrops it's time to grow.

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