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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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Oregon

0 posted 2003-11-22 02:00 PM


Inspired by Sudhir's "degrees of free"


Living Water


as the raindrop
is free to fall
from the vine
and rise again
by the sun

are we
by the Son

yet
for us
it takes a
decision

©November 22, 2003

© Copyright 2003 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-11-22 02:02 PM


and that is a difficult decision for some
jaicie114
Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
2 posted 2003-11-22 04:36 PM


Incredible....thank you.

jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

SharaRose
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-11-22 04:36 PM


Lovely words! Loved this!!
Love,
Terri~

Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

4 posted 2003-11-22 10:54 PM


This is very thoughtfully written and message well delivered.  I like the image of "Living Water", I'm going to save this.  ~K~
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