Open Poetry #29 |
My Inner Space........(graphic by Littlewing_Sue) |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Graphic By Littlewing_Sue ~>o<~ There is something deep within me that is called my inner space That longs to be with you, my Love to look upon your face When the distance between us becomes to be all these miles The longing to see you, my sweet Love turns into the worse of trials From my eye is formed a tear to crystalize Then within my heart I suddenly come to realize No matter the distance between always here with me you will be If only I will but closely look you there I will surely see For the quiet of the night when I look up to a star I feel your presence in them nearby for near me you always are In the sunset I see with colors vibrant across the sky Within I can see our love with such beauty with joy I cry Or when a gentle wind blows by and brushes against the trees Right there I seem to hear your voice in soft whispers of a breeze Yes, no matter the distance between always here with me you will be If only I will but closely look you there I will surely see ~>o<~ Revisted....because I needed to..... [This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-11-2003 01:35 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your inner space is so lovely and poetic... Truly it is. ~ You are destined to be together forever, Linda |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh Ethel, what a magnificent and very beautiful poem of love. I understand these feelings so well, and have felt them also. I wish for the two of you to be able to share together very soon...in the meantime, I much appreciate your wonderful writings...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Or when a gentle wind blows by and brushes against the trees Right there I seem to hear your voice in soft whispers of a breeze" Absolutely beautiful, Ethel. Each of your writes is more lovely than the one before. Love and hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific penning,, lady poetess
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is wonderful and the penning as beautiful as your heart. Crystal |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, and your inner-space is soooooo gorgeous and beautiful and soon will be filled with the ceremony of true love forever, yay! (kiss on cheek) You and Gary are both very special and soon will be together forever and the space will then forever be shared, God Bless You, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hi Ethel, I hope all is well! I had been away for awhile And it is taking me some time to say hi to everyone. I’ve sure missed your poetry! This inner space that you write of is what a poet would call, a heart of gold! I’m glad for you and your loved ones that you have one. And, I’m glad that we too, are fortunate enough to be blessed by it too! You Take Great Care! And I’ll talk to you soon, Richy |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Great as always bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Ethel, this is such a beautiful love poem. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful as always Ethel... and I love the pic! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes....I think the inner space, the shape of our very selves that we call spirit, is made for that. When our spirit bonds with another's in love, that space is filled, and permanently if we let it be. Even if the bond is ripped apart by life or circumstance, our shape, our person, is never the same from that bonding moment onward. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This has such a beautiful flow to it. Great job! Eric |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes those inner spaces reach out so very, very far... beautiful, Ethel... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ethel - yessss exactly! to be able to close your eyes and feel that presence is a gift in itself, as are your words (btw I adore that picture, have had it for a long time and made a graphic of it a while back - will send along k?) xxoo |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you are indeed so lovely.....as these inner thoughts are too....beautiful and I found it somewhat peaceful.....HUGSSS Lauren~ The way you move me |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Love it garysgirl Very sweet :-) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I remember this one...one of my favourites of yours. 'inner space' just speaks volumes on its own! beautiful! p.s~ I have missed you to E.M. I've been busy with college, hope you and gary are well? and gem xxxx |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
The most recent theory of the universe is that it is actually not infinite; the space inside each of us, however, really is. Nice write! Thank you for sharing it. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, Sunny Vicky Glenn Crystal Noah Ricky Bernie Sue Nancy Lee Ed Eric Karilea Sue Lauren Froggy Vandana Gemma Iceman Everyone, I am so sorry that I didn't notice that I hadn't thanked you all for your replies. I really do thank each of you and appreciate each and every one of you so much. You are all so sweet and nice. It really is good to be back, isn't it? Heart hugs to all of you, Ethel |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
this is wonderful Ethel mae [This message has been edited by Wind (10-10-2003 05:47 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Liz. I'm glad that you like it. Hugs, little friend Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You sneaky thing Ethel . . . *smile* thank you for using it I am honored you like it A heavenly picture too good to me . . . too good LittleOne xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
LOL, Sue. I did sneak that one in there, didn't I? I thought that you made it look so much better, that I wanted to others to see it. Thank you for fixing it. I appreciate you, Little One. Heart hugs, Ethel |
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