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Open Poetry #29

Pigment of my life

Chrissysue
Junior Member

since 2003-11-21

Posts 23
Nebraska

0 posted 2003-11-21 06:44 PM

My life is a myriad of colors
Ever changing hues
A never ending rainbow
Of reds and purple-blues
Honey tones crawl accross
My bright and vivid days
Splashed with purple daisies
And marmalade nosegays
As dusk settles
And crimson flows over the land
Blood red and hues of orange
Prepare to make their stand
But burgundy gives way
To shades of my indigo nights
Deep dark chasms bring out
Explosions milky white
Light litters the sky
A stark but welcome change
But not enough to save the dark
Light without a range
Dark makes way for grey
Complacent smoky hues
My life is a myriad of colors
Light from different views

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-11-21 10:10 PM

ChrissySue~
This is just rich with vivid imagery~
Positively BEAUTIFUL~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Chrissysue
Junior Member

since 2003-11-21

Posts 23
Nebraska

2 posted 2003-11-22 05:51 PM

thank you very much.. every once in awhile i do what i call a color poem ... where i try to describe emotions with colors because i think the link between the two is so great. thank you *hugs*

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2003-11-22 11:22 PM

This is gorgeous. I love descriptive poetry, and this is among the best.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-23 04:09 AM

beautiful

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