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Golden Beauty (For Ratleader)
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Golden Beauty (For Ratleader) |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio 
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Golden Beauty A sea of golden beauty floating on the wind swept shores of humanity. Sheer and wispy, like that of angelhair, with the glow of the sun shining in a swirling mist of gold. You walk through this golden beauty, and it leaves a spattering spray of gold upon your dampened skin and gently kisses your furrowed brow. These sprays of gold have been in your family for three generations. A life giving force that touches your inner core. You pray for rain- You pray to be pestilence free You pray for strength Because You help feed the world You are the farmer of wheat You are the farmer of golden beauty. Love Bon-Bon  [This message has been edited by Bonnie j (11-21-2003 11:23 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, even though this is for him, I've read it and so happy I did, let me be the first to comment, what a journey this takes one on, and to boot a marvelous heartfelt caring tribute to a fine poet. He'll love this...thanks Bon for sharing Luv ya, Lee J. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This is incredible...I don't know what to say... Except thank you, from the very center of me... this is so beautiful! I've been dejected lately, thinking that almost nobody here really liked me or my work, and that maybe I should just quietly fade away... but this is absolutely renewing! I can't thank you enough for it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Thank you for your kind replies. Lee J. Big hug coming your way. Ratleader Sorry to hear you are down, but don't think of leaving I for one enjoy your work. I always read, but sometimes do not know what to say. Glad you enjoyed. Love Bon-Bon |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You walk through this golden beauty, and it leaves a spattering spray of gold upon your dampened skin and gently kisses your furrowed brow. How very beautiful! *S* And you couldn't have written for anyone more deserving... both your words and his renew and refresh... and bless the reader who stops to visit. *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a very touching gift |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Back for a second look...and a second thank you. You made my day, and maybe my week. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ Such a big heart you have~  I love the gentle of this~ RascalLeader .. you ain't going NOWHERE but here~ And that, sir, IS AN ORDER~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
NO ONE IS LEAVING there are no political prisoners here....... though some of us have suffered a gag order once or twice we are not being held hostage here, we are free to leave, but we choose to stay NO ONE IS LEAVING we are all one family under the sun |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bonnie...This is so sweetly written....makes me smile. |
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