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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2003-09-26 01:44 AM

Black Widow Poet

Silken threads shimmer
in sunshine's pure light
Such intricate weaving
an artist's delight
Moving in closer
it's beauty is clear
Yet danger is lurking
should you get too near

What could it hurt, just
an innocent touch
You try to hold back, but
temptation's too much
Helpless you struggle
and try to break free
A prisoner of passion
forever you'll be

Black widow poet
has wrapped you in rhyme
As hourglass echoes
the passing of time

~Vicky L. Raynes

*Reposted...because it was time...smile.

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-26-2003 02:07 AM).]

dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

1 posted 2003-09-26 01:47 AM

Vic.....nice positioning....your poem and mine....enjoyed yours greatly.
dingusjr.

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

2 posted 2003-09-26 01:48 AM

What could it hurt, just
an innocent touch
Try to hold back, but
temptation's too much
Helpless you struggle
and try to break free
Prisoner of passion
forever you'll be

You're amazing Vicky. Your poetry too, of course.

I absolutely love this....

Kielo

Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self.
Cyril Connolly

I love you, and I will forever....

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-09-26 01:49 AM

I love the way you put things together.It makes it seems effortless and writing with such ease.

Crystal

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-09-26 02:04 AM

oh my The tales of a Black Widow,,

very good write vicky,,,

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

5 posted 2003-09-26 03:34 AM

Magnificent!!!! You did it again, Vicky, and the thoughts here are weaving pictures as I read...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-09-26 05:13 AM

(smiles) Oh Vicky, though I do get careful when being around spiders, I love spiders (my mom and sisters get freaked out about them always and scream "Noah, do something!", LOL!) because they are gorgeous artists and I don't kill spiders when they're around the house like many people do because I feel they are special just like every other creature, but simply put them in a jar and let them crawl free outside where they can get to their art again! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully expressive poetry, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

7 posted 2003-09-26 06:01 AM

A prisoner of passion to be sure!

But for how long?

Sometimes after mating, they... EAT, the husband widow... uhh spider... widower spider?...
ahhh... you know what I mean, right?

Well, I guess there could be worse ways to go... (!)

lol

Terrific write, as always Vicky!

And a very interesting and unique topic!

Great Work!

Richy

[This message has been edited by Richy (09-26-2003 06:01 AM).]

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2003-09-26 07:07 AM

Enjoyed the flow of this and the message...what is life without passions, which are dreams, which could very well be our reality in the next second of our lives.

Lovely write, thank you

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2003-09-26 07:09 AM

Darkly strong!
Intense, I like it!

Eric

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

10 posted 2003-09-26 11:26 AM

I live near the water so I live in spider heaven. I call my car a the Spider Mobile or a traveling spider web. Every morning I sweep down the porch and by late evening the webs are all built up again.They certainly are a busy lot.
Good poem.
Bon-Bon

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2003-09-26 05:04 PM

Ah... if only some people were as pretty as their words. *S* Excellent write! *S*

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2003-09-26 06:07 PM

Vicky... Wonderful metaphor, my friend!

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

13 posted 2003-09-26 06:58 PM

Vicky, you are brilliant!

Ahhh so many of us black widows here, are there enough men for us to eat???

into my library!

~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2003-09-26 07:00 PM

Silky...black widow poet...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

15 posted 2003-09-26 07:00 PM

I remember...and I'm smiling again...

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

16 posted 2003-09-26 07:28 PM

I don't remember and I am loving reading this one for the first time

Vicky you can write girl, really write!  Sure wish I didn't know some of these spiders, but I do.

and they sure get stuck in your hair. Excellent write!

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (09-26-2003 07:29 PM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

17 posted 2003-09-26 07:39 PM

love the passionate embrace of the web of wickedness. Loved the poem and the subliminals.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

18 posted 2003-09-26 10:12 PM

a prisoner of passion
forever you'll be

Indeed I will be.

I missed this beauty the first time and I'm so glad you reposted Vicky..thank you.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

19 posted 2003-09-26 10:25 PM

Vicky, I must have not been here when you posted this first. Sure am glad I'm here now to see this wonderful writing.

Helpless you struggle
and try to break free
A prisoner of passion
forever you'll be

Yep, that'sa true for so many of us.

Hugs

Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-26-2003 10:27 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

20 posted 2003-09-27 08:48 PM

Vicky, I love this, my sis . . .
Poetic Mistress you be indeed
xxoo

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

21 posted 2003-09-27 08:52 PM

Gosh Vicky, I missed the original...but
I am tickled as whatever that I didn't miss
this one....Love the write and the mystique
of the vision it gives my mind....

Boy, this web sure is sticky!

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

22 posted 2003-10-13 08:23 PM

yes, repost time it was...

'Twill be Happy Holloweeny soon!

enjoyed again..

hugs, g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

23 posted 2003-10-13 10:25 PM

Love this.
Sandra

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