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Open Poetry #29
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brian sites
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0 posted 2003-11-21 01:05 AM



woke up hoping
for a
       sunfall

but now I know
it's because

blue

is the deafest
of them
        all

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-11-21 02:45 AM


pretty cool piece of art here
Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-11-21 08:48 AM



This paints quite a picture.
Gives a new meaning to the word "global"

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-11-21 08:49 AM


well done
vlraynes
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4 posted 2003-11-21 08:58 AM



Bri?...

Maybe I'm reading this completely different
from how it was intended...but...

this aches

Hugs to you, my friend...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

vlraynes
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5 posted 2003-11-21 08:59 AM



computer burp...

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-21-2003 09:00 AM).]

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-11-21 09:48 AM


always seems that way, don't it Bri?
*smile*

Boo
xxoo

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-11-21 10:21 AM


brian,
Well done, enjoyed.

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