Open Poetry #29 |
First Snow (haiku) |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
North winds are blowing cold enough to freeze autumn- Snow huddles for warmth. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
it snowed here in Washington state too, its so beautiful as is this poem! Where are you at? Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Seems to be haiku night at PIP! Good one here, and I like the personification. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ROFL! THE SNOW HUDDLES FOR WARMTH? Geesh...sounds like a place that my Mississippi weather tuned body would NOT enjoy. I LOVE this...especially the part about the snow huddling for warmth. Made me smile finally in a genuine way tonight. I appreciate it. I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice...very nice |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
i can feel the chill |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Swift, drift day-snow dreams Crystal flakes of lace glisten Melt on sunny face |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Lovely....simply beautiful... How ironic, I just posted a winter poem about snow... Thanks for your beauty in words! ~ARH [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (11-21-2003 06:58 AM).] |
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