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Tim
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0 posted 2003-11-21 12:01 PM



North winds are blowing
cold enough to freeze autumn-
Snow huddles for warmth.

© Copyright 2003 Tim - All Rights Reserved
GG
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1 posted 2003-11-21 01:58 AM


it snowed here in Washington state too, its so beautiful
as is this poem!
Where are you at?

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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2 posted 2003-11-21 02:13 AM


Seems to be haiku night at PIP! Good one here, and I like the personification.

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Temptress
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3 posted 2003-11-21 02:29 AM


ROFL! THE SNOW HUDDLES FOR WARMTH? Geesh...sounds like a place that my Mississippi weather tuned body would NOT enjoy.

I LOVE this...especially the part about the snow huddling for warmth.

Made me smile finally in a genuine way tonight. I appreciate it.

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!


passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-11-21 02:40 AM


nice...very nice
ambrish
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5 posted 2003-11-21 03:18 AM


i can feel the chill
Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-11-21 06:52 AM




Swift, drift day-snow dreams
Crystal flakes of lace glisten
Melt on sunny face



A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 2003-11-21 06:58 AM




Lovely....simply beautiful...

How ironic, I just posted a winter poem about snow...

Thanks for your beauty in words!

~ARH


True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (11-21-2003 06:58 AM).]

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