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King of Hearts
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0 posted 2003-09-26 01:02 AM


Oh to love your gentle heart,
What I wouldn't give,

Life for me is death,
without you, I do not live

This kings heart beats for you,
only you can stir wuch deep emotions true,

Your sexy doe eyes, your silky hair, your soft skin,
your sweet laughter drowning me, take me in

For you, I would go through anything,
I will be your lover, friend, your king

If you only knew of my love,
I have so much devoted love to offer, to give,

Everything I own is yours,
to give you so much, I would,

Just let me love you, woman of love,
If only I could,

For now I will watch and wait,
one day you will walk through my hearts gate,

I will leave the light on inside my heart,
it will never be too late,

But for now you must know,

"I LOVE YOU"


© Copyright 2003 King of Hearts - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
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1 posted 2003-09-26 01:21 AM


This is a wonderful decleration of love and if you haven't told her you should.I knnow she'd be deeply touched.
Crystal

King of Hearts
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2 posted 2003-09-26 01:41 AM


This is my way of letting her know.....

[This message has been edited by King of Hearts (09-26-2003 01:43 AM).]

King of Hearts
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3 posted 2003-09-26 01:42 AM


Why thank you miss blueeyes....The only problem she seems to be in love with someone else....

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-09-26 03:15 AM


hmmm...maybe for a reason

everything happens for a reason

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
5 posted 2003-09-26 03:20 AM


Never let the light die out in your heart. Leave the light on in the window.
Shara~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
6 posted 2003-09-26 06:19 AM


oh good...chapter 2...i was wondering when we were going to get to read the next one...why dont you just tell her...?
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2003-09-26 06:27 AM


Listen, I don't have any clue who you are, nor do I want to know. I am in love with Goldenrose and he loves me. Please do not post anymore poems on PIP for me or about me.
If you care any at all then you will stop this and be mature about it! If it doesn't stop I will report it to the administrators.
I have had patience with you and tried to avoid you and I have held off from repling to you, but after today I am informing you of my wishes.
Thanks ARH

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-09-27 01:32 AM


helen...lol...

that's why

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
9 posted 2003-09-27 01:44 AM


lol i guess and now time to move on....
JilGirl
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10 posted 2003-09-27 02:00 AM


Lovely write.

A reply to the poem ~~ not to whatever else seems to be going on here. (Responding to following post from Dixie).

Perhaps she should be informed. THEN you'll know whether you should leave the scene, move on and find another. "One way" love can be the most painful -- for THE ONE loving the unavailable or unknowing other.


'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

[This message has been edited by JilGirl (09-27-2003 07:52 AM).]

passing shadows
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11 posted 2003-09-27 04:27 AM


JilGirl, read reply post 7 on here...she is informed and already gave her response to this poem.
QjQ
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12 posted 2003-09-27 05:13 AM


I guess one has to hold one in their heart till they hold them in their arms,,,

                                                       

Mistletoe Angel
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13 posted 2003-09-27 04:39 PM


"Your sexy doe eyes, your silky hair, your soft skin,
your sweet laughter drowning me, take me in"




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, this part really made me smile, imagining the eyes of a doe in loves heart! (giggles) This is soooooo adorable, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet King of Hearts, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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