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Camping on 10 Bay Beach
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Camping on 10 Bay Beach |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Spending a Night on the Beach Proudly, light slowly tucks dark of night into slumber An eager world awakening, pouring rays of brightness Developing a new day…flames burning, like no other It’s flaming ability, bringing life into dynamic minds Mortals reap a magic, erecting golden globes divine Casting gazes over horizon, from a tending sun Embracing smooth, hewn decks of dreams and warmth Like a great master sailing endless upon seas His treasures choral secrets of indefinable knowing A never ending glow filling space with happiness An all comforting thoughts, sparkling friendliness In all interests of modesty, reposes another opulent thread Proportional filament relaxed, precise mysterious legend From an ambitious surrogate rich and interactive Balancing our vessels, an ambiance of island life Where warm sun beckons and seashores call Armoring romantic, presenting wedding vows Where that vast ocean is an evocative symbol Ever-changing, yet, a gradual spiritual level Celebrating many new days, keeping our lives reflective Like a seashell, busting out through some azure bonnet of memory Beautiful empty abodes of unique breathing designs Multicolored forms that once sheltered and accompanied life Or where the sun turns a paling sapphire sky Into swirling outbursts of crimson tones, Bringing simplicity to life with a totality of perfection Prompting immensity in a fluid unfolding cadence Whispering intriguing tales, like the winds of an activist Evermore within eternity’s vigorous grains smooth and languid Propelling, urging me forth, within a rosy thread of life There are roads irregular, yet stages of complimenting rhymes In between some invisible space, intact within all knowing eyes Well-located affection, moving correspondence earthward Peering out of an adjoining corner of a sun-lighted ocean Introducing directions of brightness like a new mother Where neat arrangements move our minds curiously A most dramatic and great miracle in human history Welcoming thoroughly, naming our course Inviting us into the parlor, bending on knees to propose Written upon my mind, were these moments spent on one of my Favorite Beaches |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sounds like an absolutely wonderful experience LeeJ. Very well done. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well it's too damn cold to do this now, but when the spring hits, I'm outta here! I'll meet you at the pier! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And I will be there too! Yeah, too cold now...but you sure know how to plant beach fever in the brain. A beautifully picturesque write. Thanx LeeJ. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and you have beautifully transcribed to the blue pages, that which had been written on your illustrious mind!   Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
haven't been to a beach in years..but when I get that chance I am going to spend an evening there... very inspiring M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jeej, I hope you put sun lotion on when you were writing this. LOL  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I love the way you overlap images that are unlike, to capture those dimensions of them that are very like. You're a master of that, and you show it here. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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