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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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0 posted 2003-11-19 10:49 PM


I built my life around you
It is something I can't change
And I am scared of ever changing it
I love you that much

Without you the sun would never shine
And the rain would always pour down
I would never smile
And always wear a frown

Without you in my life
It would never be fun
It would always be dull
And really boring everyday

I built my life around you
And right now
That will never change

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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1 posted 2003-11-19 11:22 PM


Sounds familiar.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-11-21 07:45 AM


well done
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-11-21 07:53 AM


the_loner_23
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Hockeychick19
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since 2002-10-29
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Massachusetts, USA
4 posted 2003-11-21 02:22 PM


Julie,

I like this one. I can remember when I felt like that once or twice.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

angelblueyes
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5 posted 2003-11-21 03:53 PM


Glad that you have these things.You deserve it sweet lady.
Crystal

vandana
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6 posted 2003-11-21 06:51 PM


enjoyed
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