Sailboats do tell Tales (For Cpat)

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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-11-19 06:57 PM

The smoke does rise,
above the eastern peir
as folded sailboats meet the land.

Not one foot stepped lightly
upon the shore,
not one treading horse
was wild in shedding grace.

And still,
a soft horizon was met
with blown away kisses
that never got
to their reciever.

The sun does burn them all away..

So
we
may forget
the words
we meant not to speak,
but are spoken through time..
perpetually.

Our fingers may never caress in haste,
in judgement,
must you be a traitor to my words..

I've
moaned
through
the eyes
of midnight
and
sung
in tune with
nocturnal birds..

and still,
these boats do not hault in their folly..
My beastly forewarning
of a
tortured
storm
that holds nothing
but
the wrong answers
to the right questions.

So this is what it's like
to collapse in the arms
of
desolation...

I will forget ye not.

[This message has been edited by Kaoru (11-19-2003 06:58 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-11-19 07:16 PM

He will be very proud to read this, Meghan.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-11-19 07:22 PM

"So
we
may forget
the words
we meant not to speak,
but are spoken through time..
perpetually."

again...you completely blow me away

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2003-11-19 07:31 PM

Loved these lovely lines.

"So
we
may forget
the words
we meant not to speak,
but are spoken through time..
perpetually."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-20 04:39 AM

what can I say? this is cool!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2003-11-20 10:43 AM

you did good girl.... you did very good..

you always amaze me... and I'm damned proud to say so....

you get my mail?

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (11-20-2003 06:55 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-11-20 11:06 AM

Ohh Meg, I do believe this is your best

here . . . YES perfection

I've
moaned
through
the eyes
of midnight
and
sung
in tune with
nocturnal birds..

xxoo

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-11-20 11:12 AM

Wonderful writing...I am in awe!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

8 posted 2003-11-20 12:04 PM

Very very nice...One of the best I've read in awhile.

Well crafted, well thought, well spoken

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2003-11-20 06:56 PM

check your mail girl..

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