Open Poetry #29 |
Cabin of Yesterday |
Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Cabin of Yesterday A spiraling vortex of ice and snow encircle the tiny cabin of yesterday. The wind, screaming like a wild crazed banshee, howling with the volume of the ages. Blowing, pushing ,crying - Tearing down walls that once was a haven for love, warmth and security. Once a family resided within these now frozen rooms of emptiness. The family growing with the times. Moved to an affluent area leaving behind their hopes and dreams. Lost values of warmth and love replaced with riches, loneliness, and suspicion. This saddened family now stand before a mirror made of gold wishing for the closeness and the warmth of yesterday. Let us return to the cabin in the woods Leave these riches and houses made of crumbling clay. Let us return to our heavenly father and to His hopes and never ending dreams. Bring love, warmth and security back into our hardened hearts. Let us return to our loving Cabin of Yesterday. Love Bon-Bon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bonnie, Well said enjoyed the read. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Very thought provoking, Bonnie. Thank you. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful...I needed this tonight |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'm right there with ya, do we take a train or a bus? Maybe a plane, where is it, I want to go there right now????? Hehehehhee Lovely lovely write, bringing back thoughts of yearning for the olden days, when things wre simpler, people knew their neighbors, and people were more honest then...I remember purchasing 3 rooms of furniture on a minimal down payment and a hand shake???? Anyway, thank whole bunches for writing and sharing. Love ya Me |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Amen to that. When do we leave -- or are we there already, if we choose? |
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