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Cassandra 98
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since 2002-12-08
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0 posted 2003-11-19 01:02 AM


Always trying too much, always crying inside
This enigma keeps rid of my pride

My confusion, frustration
Soon it will all collide

Too much to say
It's all in disarray

I worry too much
And assume as such

Just let it go right
Forgive and everything will be alright

Easier said then done
If only things could be undone

Corruption, temptation, fascination, obsession, infatuation...always seems that you have an obligation...How can I be beautiful

Too much, so little
I'm becoming brittle...inside

I'm empty, lonely, lost and accused

...numb

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-11-19 01:15 AM


"Too much, so little
I'm becoming brittle...inside"

~ I was particulary affected by these lines.

When the numbness goes away, hopefully you will be seeing things from a better perspective. I hope everything turns out for your highest and best and that you are happy.

Warm healing hugs,
EA

ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
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2 posted 2003-11-19 03:41 AM


good one

Goldenrose
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3 posted 2003-11-19 05:49 AM


Hope things become clearer soon...and that you are able to write about more happier things...you are a very good writer..thanks for the words......

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-11-19 05:53 AM


Oh, this touched my heart.
I hope things are getting better for you.
Hugs  
Ethel

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displaced
5 posted 2003-11-21 05:05 AM


you said this well!
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