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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-11-18 06:16 PM



The tapestry keeps weaving
though the skein was tied
a'long ago,
choice
is still the precious binding
and the seam.

©2003 by icebox

© Copyright 2003 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-11-18 06:18 PM


simple but so well done
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-11-18 06:26 PM


My gawd man...you express yourself so well.
I love this...
Still love this pic the best!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

SimplyGold
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3 posted 2003-11-18 06:33 PM


I am always amazed at how much can be said with so few words.

Well done!
SG

steavenr
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4 posted 2003-11-18 06:43 PM


Succinct and provoking.  Like to meditate on one's like this.  Nice job.
James_A_Fraser
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5 posted 2003-11-18 06:49 PM


I like this .... into my library with it! You have shown an image few of us get to see.



~~J

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6 posted 2003-11-18 06:52 PM


enjoyed
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-11-18 07:22 PM



Thine be the visage of a king, my lord.

Thy faithful servant readers, toucheth yon blue sky whene'er ye dost do so...

Blessed be,
EA

scorpio
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right...there
8 posted 2003-11-18 07:29 PM


A tightly woven write.  Choice must prevail if we are to be free.

believe in what your heart feels...

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-11-18 07:36 PM


Very interesting, Iceman...

Hey, I like the new picture best, too!
Hugs  
Ethel

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In Your Poetic Mind
10 posted 2003-11-18 07:37 PM


incredible.....

Lauren~
~~**~~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

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