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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-11-18 12:01 PM


Sly sultry sun winks at passing moon
underneath blanket of clouds as
sun gives way to starry night
as palm trees dance the night away under
night skys in November strange

[This message has been edited by Brad Majors (11-19-2003 02:41 PM).]

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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-11-18 12:14 PM


LOL great job Dan!  Now which one is it?

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

VAS
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2 posted 2003-11-18 12:18 PM


Cool, Brad!

I've never been to Georgia, my only encounter is "Gone With the Wind." Does GA have palm trees, too?

You have vivid scenes wrapped around your feelings that come through this one.


Yes, re. my absence, I have a bad habit of getting depressed when my stuff is seemingly "ignored." Not too good with rejection even when I know there are so many posting here that it is daunting to try to be a reader of many let alone most. And "all" forget about it if one must make a living and attempt to keep house and relationships.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-11-18 12:22 PM


Georgia has a few palm trees but this came off the top of my head based on the letters I had to use.
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4 posted 2003-11-18 12:38 PM


well done
littlewing
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5 posted 2003-11-19 03:14 AM


I found one of them Brad!
very nice and yes maybe 10 Susan's here
*smile*
xxoo

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6 posted 2003-11-19 02:42 PM


I like this alot!
garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-11-19 03:58 PM


Very Good, Brad.
Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-11-19 04:03 PM


Excellent Brad....you met you own challenge very well!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2003-11-19 04:26 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, you certainly graced your own challenge so wonderfully, dearest friend, Susan will be deeply touched by this as this challenge has touched so many already and real soon I'll join in too, yay! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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10 posted 2003-11-19 04:34 PM


very nice
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