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Guardurthoughts
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0 posted 2003-11-18 03:18 AM


A painter can not paint a kiss without a lover,
for there isn’t a lover… with out a kiss. I discovered
a kiss in the depths of lies and manipulation
and that kiss became my lover.

We danced across the stars and swam in the meddeteran,
for our music was always faint and always silent when questioned.
For that kiss was mine and mine became the lover.

The melody was of the sea and the notes were of the waves.
That kiss was mine beneath that glorious castle on the shore,
it was mine even in the moons seductive shadows.

For the painter is unknown and the kiss shall always remain a puzzle
but the lover is mine and mine that lover shall always be.

© Copyright 2003 Erica Grover - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-11-18 04:47 AM


true...good write, I liked this
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-11-18 06:06 PM


Enjoyed...James
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3 posted 2003-11-19 10:06 AM


enjoyed this and look forward to reading more from you.
EvocativeVerse2
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4 posted 2003-11-19 10:22 AM


This is magnificent. Bravo and well done.

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