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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
Can I find a new set of eyes That won't just wait in corners Like the most imperial of spies For my memory Once wild and free Now runs Only to 'thee Fair Lady Queen of Magic City SMC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Yours was the first poem I read on PIP. Great read. I have glanced at a few others. This is a great site--was recommended to my wife by a neighbor. Will have to thank her. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WELL DONE! Welcome to Passions. Word-of-mouth poetic advertising seems to bring so much new talent in here, we are all delighted with new fresh blood! LOL, ok, you don't have to bleed, just write and read. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Oooh! It touches me with a hint of sensuality and a free dose of strawberry fantastic!! Sorry. Now that I've got that out of my system. 'Twas dynamic and absolutley profound. Your words are lovely and touching. You are an awesome example of quick yet powerful. Lovely, my dear friend, lovely. Member, yv P.S. That crazy quote was compliments of me so don't lay the blame on anyone else for my wicked craziness...HaHaHa!! yv [This message has been edited by yv (11-17-2003 09:12 PM).] |
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Magic Solias Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 73California, USA |
Borges-like. I like the strangeness in it, that's its magic. Magic Solias |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WinterTao & Wife~ Be sure and thank that neighbor for sending you to the best and most talented poetry forum on the Internet~ WELCOME~ Enjoyed the write~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! I know you're going to love it here! Please check your email for a special greeting. Nancy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (sigh) Wow, love the unique and artistic feel of this excellent debut, sweet friend, you've got all eyes and eas to your attention here, God Bless You, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wondrous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, wintertao. I hope you find this place to be your new poet's home. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Very well done. Loved this! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wintertao, Welcome and well done. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A bump for a good first poem..... and for a good idea over in the suggestion box! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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