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Ode to my goddess
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Ode to my goddess |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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In your eyes dwell the angelic hosts of heaven. Your hair cascades like the most majestic waterfalls as it falls to your shoulders Your body so perfect that Michaelangelo's sculpture pales in comparison Lips so lucious that your kiss could send a sinner's eyes toward heaven When you speak the heavenly creatures speak in one accord. Who can compare? Can I be so foolish to try to catch the eye of a goddess such as you. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Dan, this is my favorite!!!  "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I am glad you liked it |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My heart be still! I must say that this aspect of your poetic talent is very appealing to this reader!!!   EA |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
I enjoyed that Brad! WildPoet To earn respect, Give respect |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
I see this is a place where I will learn a lot. This is so very complete. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Beautifully written. It seems as if someone has completely captured your pen and your muse, as well as your heart and eyes. |
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Magic Solias Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 73California, USA |
That captures perfection in a most beautiful way. Perfect balance! Magic Solias |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you! |
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