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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-11-17 03:20 PM


In your eyes
dwell the angelic hosts
of heaven.

Your hair cascades
like the most majestic waterfalls
as it falls to your shoulders

Your body so perfect
that Michaelangelo's sculpture
pales in comparison

Lips so lucious
that your kiss
could send a sinner's eyes
toward heaven

When you speak
the heavenly creatures
speak in one accord.

Who can compare?

Can I be so foolish
to try to catch the eye of
a goddess such as you.


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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-11-17 03:27 PM


Dan, this is my favorite!!!  

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-11-17 03:28 PM


I am glad you liked it
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-11-17 03:30 PM


My heart be still! I must say that this aspect of your poetic talent is very appealing to this reader!!!


EA

WildPoet
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4 posted 2003-11-17 03:30 PM


I enjoyed that Brad!

WildPoet

To earn respect, Give respect
To live life, nurture life
To enjoy Love, Share Love

Brad Majors
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5 posted 2003-11-17 03:33 PM


thank you
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6 posted 2003-11-17 03:37 PM


I see this is a place where I will learn a lot. This is so very complete.
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7 posted 2003-11-17 09:18 PM


Beautifully written. It seems as if someone has completely captured your pen and your muse, as well as your heart and eyes.

Magic Solias
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8 posted 2003-11-17 09:32 PM


That captures perfection in a most beautiful way.  Perfect balance!

Magic Solias

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Brad Majors
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9 posted 2003-11-18 12:24 PM


thank you!
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