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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-11-16 10:52 PM



Framed

did you see me
looking out the window
crying through the pane
locked breath pressed
vapor screaming silently
a heart hanging on sash
beating against the tears


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1 posted 2003-11-16 10:56 PM


I see you now.... this is so vivid!
Beautifully said, though the subject could never be called beautiful.

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in the shadows
2 posted 2003-11-17 12:09 PM


Yes.
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3 posted 2003-11-17 04:51 AM


gawd! I see, I see.


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4 posted 2003-11-17 01:31 PM


Vividly.

Excellent write!

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