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Open Poetry #29

Framed

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-11-16 10:52 PM

Framed

did you see me
looking out the window
crying through the pane
locked breath pressed
vapor screaming silently
a heart hanging on sash
beating against the tears

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2003-11-16 10:56 PM

I see you now.... this is so vivid!
Beautifully said, though the subject could never be called beautiful.

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icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2003-11-17 12:09 PM

Yes.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-11-17 04:51 AM

gawd! I see, I see.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2003-11-17 01:31 PM

Vividly.

Excellent write!

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