Earthbreaks ........ Haiku

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Open Poetry #29

Earthbreaks ........ Haiku

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2003-11-16 10:48 PM

Earth has fractured here,
her bones pushed out through the skin.
She seems to bleed trees.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-11-16 10:50 PM

Yes so true. Beautifully written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-11-16 10:57 PM

is she bleeding trees or are the trees that stand there naked and cold bleeding for her?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-11-17 05:09 AM

awesome!

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2003-11-17 05:30 AM

this one makes me think...
I like that... thanks.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

C?
Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

5 posted 2003-11-17 06:16 AM

Yes! I come back after so long, and there is a great one right at the top! RIGHT ON! If anyone around here has ever even read my stuff, they'd definately know I'd love this.
Cheers

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-11-17 10:09 AM

You make me homesick.
That's a good thing.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2003-11-17 01:35 PM

A camera is superfluous with images this superb. *S*

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