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Betrayal |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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Poison droped in my glass I can feel the knife puncture my back. Gleaful eyes that once were with me,now there eyes just plot about me. Songs of yesterday I sing no more all i feel is being torn. Ears ringing about the discussion made. Blind to what I am and my situation. Having no Idea Of my aggervation. Story to be told no one asked How Am i supost to forget about this past. Riding the hourse back bare and rough. Feel my fingers getting tough. My nails break off as i dig in the dirt the pain the tourment the feeling of hurt Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... [This message has been edited by Foxyoasis (11-16-2003 07:24 PM).] |
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tecoyah Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 83NY |
good write but,....is it a poison, or a potion |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
It's Poison,Sorry I got caught up and dident spell check. Thanks for telling me  Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I hope when your story is told someone listens. My heart goes out to you.  Love, Terri~  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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