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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-11-16 03:09 PM



+*+*+*+*+

As water falls ~ so do I,
Freely from a summit.
Gushing forth with no abide,
As into love I plummet.

The landing can be turbulent,
Whirling around in eddies,
Losing sight of ups and downs,
Shaken and unsteady.

I feel alive with energy,
Coursing through my being.
There are no guarantees in life,
But I'm knowing what I'm seeing.

A man of rock, by my side,
Steadfast, kind, and true.
He shares his strength, and I my joy
In sparkling waters blue.

+*+*+*+*+


[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-16-2003 09:11 PM).]

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Jes
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1 posted 2003-11-16 03:11 PM


Smile

i liked this.

Jes


ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2003-11-16 03:14 PM


You captured the fall as only you can.
All happiness.  Wonderful write. TD

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3 posted 2003-11-16 04:35 PM


EarthyOne~
Just precious~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-11-16 06:11 PM


Jes ~

Hi, there! I see you live in Denmark! That is one of the places that I would like to visit some day!

I'm glad you liked my poem!

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

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5 posted 2003-11-16 06:12 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the way you depict love as a waterfall here, sweet friend, this is a wonderful foundation that I wish to last forever for you, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Earth Angel
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TD ~

Thank you for such a sweet reply, Dear TD!

Warm hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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Marge ~

I appreciate the special "P" word reply! Thank you!


EO

SharaRose
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8 posted 2003-11-16 06:17 PM


Light hearted, and breezy feel to this. Very nice to read!!! A delight for sure.
Love,
Terri~

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Noah ~

Thank you for your blessings and warm wishes! We started out as best friends a few years ago which makes our deepening relationship all the more special!

~ Your time will come, and when it does, it will have been worth the wait!

Loveya!
Linda


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10 posted 2003-11-16 06:19 PM


SharaRose ~

Hi, Terri! It's good to hear from you! Hope all is well with you and yours!

Thank you for your warm response to my poem!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

lil' Angel
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11 posted 2003-11-16 07:19 PM


I liked this poem.  Nice job Earth Angel.
Earth Angel
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12 posted 2003-11-16 07:23 PM


lil' angel ~

Thank you very much, sweet cherub!


EA

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13 posted 2003-11-16 07:27 PM


Very Pretty! Good Job

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-11-16 07:29 PM


Foxyoasis ~

Your name still makes me smile!

I appreciate your warm comments!


EA

Patricia
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15 posted 2003-11-16 07:39 PM


This is beautiful, EA.  You write perfect meter and rhyme...something I am working toward, wondering if I will ever get there.

Love this...

Patricia

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16 posted 2003-11-16 08:57 PM


Patricia, that was kind of you to say but you, dear poetess, underestimate your own abilities! I am a big fan of your poetry ~ metered and otherwise!


EA

SimplyGold
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17 posted 2003-11-16 09:09 PM


Enjoyed as always. Thumbs up to you!

SG

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2003-11-16 09:13 PM



SG ~

You certainly have been busy! I'm glad to see that you popped by! Thank you for the thumbs up!

Warm hugs 'n smiles,
EA

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