Open Poetry #29 |
As Water Falls |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
+*+*+*+*+ As water falls ~ so do I, Freely from a summit. Gushing forth with no abide, As into love I plummet. The landing can be turbulent, Whirling around in eddies, Losing sight of ups and downs, Shaken and unsteady. I feel alive with energy, Coursing through my being. There are no guarantees in life, But I'm knowing what I'm seeing. A man of rock, by my side, Steadfast, kind, and true. He shares his strength, and I my joy In sparkling waters blue. +*+*+*+*+ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-16-2003 09:11 PM).] |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile i liked this. Jes |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You captured the fall as only you can. All happiness. Wonderful write. TD |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EarthyOne~ Just precious~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Jes ~ Hi, there! I see you live in Denmark! That is one of the places that I would like to visit some day! I'm glad you liked my poem! Warm, welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the way you depict love as a waterfall here, sweet friend, this is a wonderful foundation that I wish to last forever for you, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
TD ~ Thank you for such a sweet reply, Dear TD! Warm hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marge ~ I appreciate the special "P" word reply! Thank you! EO |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Light hearted, and breezy feel to this. Very nice to read!!! A delight for sure. Love, Terri~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ Thank you for your blessings and warm wishes! We started out as best friends a few years ago which makes our deepening relationship all the more special! ~ Your time will come, and when it does, it will have been worth the wait! Loveya! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
SharaRose ~ Hi, Terri! It's good to hear from you! Hope all is well with you and yours! Thank you for your warm response to my poem! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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lil' Angel Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116 |
I liked this poem. Nice job Earth Angel. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
lil' angel ~ Thank you very much, sweet cherub! EA |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
Very Pretty! Good Job Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Foxyoasis ~ Your name still makes me smile! I appreciate your warm comments! EA |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is beautiful, EA. You write perfect meter and rhyme...something I am working toward, wondering if I will ever get there. Love this... Patricia |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Patricia, that was kind of you to say but you, dear poetess, underestimate your own abilities! I am a big fan of your poetry ~ metered and otherwise! EA |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Enjoyed as always. Thumbs up to you! SG |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
SG ~ You certainly have been busy! I'm glad to see that you popped by! Thank you for the thumbs up! Warm hugs 'n smiles, EA |
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