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Jes
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Denmark

0 posted 2003-11-16 02:18 PM


If you seek the one..

Are you looking and looking
Wondering and wondering.
Seeking and seeking.

Or do you just sit back and wait for something to happen.


If you want the one..

Are you doing and doing.
Trying and trying.
Going and going.

Or do you just sit back and wait for something to happen.

----->

Im looking and looking, wondering and wondering, seeking and seeking, doing and doing, trying and trying, going and going.

I hurt the one that was but still has the laugh and the smile.

So i simply go with life awhile.

So i never sit back and wait for something to happen.

Smile

Jes

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Snowflake From Hell
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1 posted 2003-11-16 02:24 PM


I bet not too many people these days ask themselves that...bet they will now...good write

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies.   Dimmu Borgir

Jes
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Denmark
2 posted 2003-11-16 02:27 PM


Sure sure snowflake, hehhehe made it abit for fun, though there are many thoughts in it.

Smile

Jes


Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-11-17 10:44 PM


lol
you have a great sense of humor Jes

Jes
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Denmark
4 posted 2003-11-18 01:16 AM


Thanks Midnite, i am glad i coul dbring ya a smile.

Smile

Jes


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