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amielou82
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since 2003-11-16
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0 posted 2003-11-16 09:32 AM


I wish I could fly,
To have big beautiful wings,
That soar me way up high,
So I could see what the world brings.
I’d fly over the land and over the deep blue sea,
And get the feeling of being alone and free.
No body to answer to or any rules to follow,
Just flying around forgetting about tomorrow.

To be high above the storm as it thunders,
Looking down through the clouds at earth and its many wonders.
Leaving the rest of the world standing still,
My dream to be able to fly becomes real.
As I enjoy the wind pass me by while in flight,
I end the day high above as it turns into night.
So come and join me and head up towards the sky,
Cause nothing in life can make happier then the feeling you get when you fly.

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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-11-16 09:43 AM


Nice...like breezes...light, and wonderful!
Love,
Terri~

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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Denmark
2 posted 2003-11-16 11:43 AM


I would go there with you smile with taht feeling of freedom, and the power of just doing as i want, smile, sometimes i think we think of flying just because what you told in this poem, to forget and to hide but also to be free to be yaself, just for a short while.

Smile

Jes


Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion
3 posted 2003-11-16 02:18 PM


I liked the images you gave off and all in all it was a fun read

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies.   Dimmu Borgir

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