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The Eye of I
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The Eye of I |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Eye of I How sees the eye of the I Confusion or illusion Is pain and fear the service here Or the censures of touch and hear And where lies the true of true Is it out or within you? The senses that move our bones Are full of spirits undertones I cannot judge a paradox It be illusion or a pox Nor can I say the day is day For that I need a cast, in stay. It covers me a shawl of mourn Caressing me each early dawn Placing me dimensions lie Hanging an abyss of sigh What e’er our fate we gravitate The endless line of figure eight. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Everyone finds a special place wherein resides a special grace I find my own within your poem when you welcome me into your home. Thank you for making every day special, Sy.  |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi Seymour! I get to comment first . Bravo! Loved it my firend. You do this oh so well. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Not fair Sunshine...you hit the return key before me! LOL! Oh well guess I can settle for being 2nd on the list. Well done once again Seymour! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Seymour Tabin../\..i always enjoy reading your poems; that special way you express yourself.. ../\..Spiros --------------trees-------- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You are just a love, that's all there is to it. EvocativeVerse2, First or last it is always my pleasure to have your reply. Spiros, And replies are my enjoyment, thank you. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Seymour...you give me so much to think about, so much that I find true. And you have to know that figure eight image will not leave me. Patricia |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Patricia, As you know the figure eight is the symbol for infinity. Alive or not we seem to follow that path. LOL |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"And where lies the true of true Is it out or within you? The senses that move our bones Are full of spirits undertones" Morning Sy!! Liked this verse especially...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I like the figure 8 for it is continuous~~~ hugs M |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Deep poetry always makes me hungry When you put this poem on my plate I ate it quickly, and was sate... But please do not refrain From portions, more... Because my mind is like the plant And like it I implore.... "Feed me Seymour" enjoyable read, as always _____ice____ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Your like is my like. LOL Maureen, Thank you my dear. Ice, I spent much time in snow and ice And now I know that ice is nice. LOL |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile i liked this wery much, and all teh comments put another smile on my face. Smile Jes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jes, Thank you for the smile. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ah, good morning dear Sy ... such wonder and charm presented to us this morning from the magic of your imagination and pen. Enjoy this day ... hugs, Marti “Prayer makes the heart large enough until it can contain God’s gift of Himself.” |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I eye with delectation, Your daily exportation, Of yourself to page of blue, I enjoy the rhyme of you. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"What e’er our fate we gravitate The endless line of figure eight." Infinite wisdom! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, Good morning dear and thank you for the read and nice comment. Tim, Thank you my friend. icebox, Thank you much. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
One thing that I know for sure is that I like the eye of Sigh guy!  Huggums, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Ya know talking with angels is fun.  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Your poetry is like receiving a gift each and every day. Lovely Seymour. Afternoon tea and tarts? Alrighty then. hugs, Chris  Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Awww, you are so sweet, Seymour!! I love your poetry, but I also love your sweet replies and little smilies to everyone, too. Thanks for sharing YOU with us every day.  Hugs,   Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, So nice to read your post, missed you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, You are the jam of my replies And this is from the eye of I. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
I enjoyed readin this it drew me in...ill hafta read more of your stuff We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies. Dimmu Borgir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Snowflake, Thank you for the read. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The senses that move our bones Are full of spirits undertones I cannot judge a paradox It be illusion or a pox Nor can I say the day is day For that I need a cast, in stay. It covers me a shawl of mourn Caressing me each early dawn Placing me dimensions lie Hanging an abyss of sigh What e’er our fate we gravitate The endless line of figure eight. ==================================== this very tardy moth is smiling at you for all these WAAAAAAAAY COOOOOOOL couplets of rhyme and word play....you are just too cool for school and too adorable for your own good. LOL These eyes see the writing on the wall ... youre a poet and all the rest of us know it. *ww*  |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Your poetry is always so wonderful, need I say more.  SG |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And you are my inspiration. Need I say more. WWRS SimplyGold I thank you so much and need I say more. |
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