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Winter White
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Winter White |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Come to me in winters absolution, as crystalline tat backlit by borrowed moon drifts thick of winter white beneath our step. Walk with me through moments content, as hush of frosted lace kisses upturned lash melting reticence to collect in desire. Lie with me bare of defense, as restlessness is sated feel my love search you without need to turn from the heat. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) And may love forever turn the snow into a white velvet blanket that forever comforts you at night as you dream, sparkling with the moonlight of loves tears of joy! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Remind me to read this every night the temp goes below 59 degrees F.... whew...  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Whew is right! I read this and shouted, "Wow, Duncan!" My kids have no idea why, and that is a good thing! LOL Beautiful and very, very...well you know. The news said 45 degrees. Huh...feels much warmer than that now! Patricia |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you gentle poet, you. sighs and smiles. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
This is very sensual, with the right amount of erotic.....Beautifully said.... Lauren~ i carry your heart with me i am never without it you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky the wonder that keeps stars apart- e.e.cummings [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (11-15-2003 10:54 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan Well done a very nice read.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
no need for a blankie, heh? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Come to me in winters absolution, as crystalline tat backlit by borrowed moon drifts thick of winter white beneath our step. Walk with me through moments content, as hush of frosted lace kisses upturned lash melting reticence to collect in desire. ============================ Do you know how cool this poem is? do you know how gorgeous it is? I am soooo loving the vocab and imagery in this...and the personifi... Stunning write here Dunc... truly. without need to turn from the heat. and that part.... (you know) MOTH ANTHEM   OH and? winter white GOTCH YA!!! heheheeeeeeeeeee  Words break into splinters on the pages I write |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Damn.. just...damn!! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I shall now go back and savour the flavour of this one for the third time!   EA |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Sigh.. Sigh.. You touch me! SG |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I come back from a weekend away and look what I find! And so beautifully written... I love this line.. "in winters absolution" I will be back....  "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Told you I would be back... /pip/Forum82/HTML/003227.html "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling).. you finally decide to write something?? lord..about time..you slacker... well.. when we have to wait as long as we do for you to get in the mood to write..we can only savor what you offer, when you do... lots in this one to savor.. well done sir.. |
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