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mysticpoe
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0 posted 2003-11-15 05:22 PM


You stretched outwardly
those gray lined offerings
with a terminal touch.
But still I - , could feel -
as those daily massages
and conceivable tangibles - so known.
With the evening paper
you bring me – typed for all to see,
wondering
all the time
this place we live in
this note you wrote.
Coddled and torn
suggesting no end, and read.

……. So,
when your feet
crowd yesterdays concrete,
and the laden ink never dries.
You will be known for
this life, and
the reason, behind

mine.


If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (11-15-2003 08:04 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-11-15 08:11 PM




(sigh) Ink is not just what's in the pen, it is also what wells from within ones heart, the pressure of ones fingers, and wen ink is spilt, it can't be forgotten no matter how it is spread! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is deep and heartfelt writing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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2 posted 2003-11-15 08:42 PM


Thanks Noah, as always. I see your HEART is filled with the right of way. God Bless you too my friend.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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