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Open Poetry #29

Seeping Past Poetic Lines

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-11-15 09:01 AM

Seeping Past Poetic Lines

When I am at a loss,
I read of "Time Past, Rhyme Last
Brood Needs, Brood Read.
Mood" words missed
to cloak me in
"Past Time..."

I search my finds for the words that lift me up,
and smile at the remembrances of conversation
not seeking perfection, adding one plus one,
feeling the good of you from afar.

I wish for your thoughts to be upon me,
less words of choice,
my manners associating
their need of understanding,
always, remembering
that wearing of the green
and on that day, blue eyes
that did lay upon mine.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-11-15 09:12 AM

Maureen,
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-11-15 09:18 AM

MzWynter~

'always, remembering
that wearing of the green
and on that day, blue eyes
that did lay upon mine'

Sometimes your thoughts parallel a remember in me, that I wasn't sure was still there~
Thank you sweetie~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-11-15 12:51 PM

(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I just love how you continue to dive for pearls between the lines, and just look at what you uncover! (sigh) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-15 02:00 PM

I have to second Marge here

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-11-15 02:56 PM

No matter what it is of your thoughts...these
are divine...very true feelings...may the
blue again lie upon thy eyes...

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