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Just a Walk
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Just a Walk |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Just a Walk I walked upon a spider’s web Just about the time of ebb Carefully I stepped each strand Lightly touching hand on hand Curiosity, light of rum Juiced me like a wad of gum Drove away my fear of catch The possible of my dispatch It was my youth that held the shield It made impervious my wield And I was set for any game Protected by a youths enflame But luckily I woke the dream Before the end of luckless seem And I survived to dream again To this I say Amen, Amen. Dream your dreams and watch your lie Not all dreams are apple pie. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling...I like the way you walk your talk.  Good morning, Sy! |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
what a wonderful walk! Neeraja |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! ~ Whew! That was a close one! If I had dreamt of a spider, I may not have survived the night! LOL   EA |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"It was my youth that held the shield It made impervious my wield And I was set for any game Protected by a youths enflame" Ahhhh ... the passions of youth to keep us strong and impervious! What a smile this brought to me this morning, Sy. "Not all dreams are apple pie" ... loved that! Great message, and a lovely form.  Best wishes and good morning hugs, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I do not know how you consistently do it ... but I'm so glad you do~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And some dreams don't even mean what we think! Come, sit and have tea, and tell me all about it. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your rhymes are the apple and the *winkie* of my eye  Amen Amen Amen Amen  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
And my little one is mocking my "Aha" to this one Seymour. I had to "Aha" aloud. Wonderful write. I have wondered the same thing Marge Tindal wonders. But I will keep questioning to myself and just be thankful that you do and do it so well! Patricia |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine I like the way you write. LOL Hugs Neeraja Thank you sweet. Earth Angel Aw spiders ain't so bad. LOL Kit, Hugs back, long time no see. Missed you Marge, And I'm so glad you reply, hugs. Nancy, That's true, be there for tea and talk. JM Randy is comming over with apple pie. WWRS |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful..as always..Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Patricia Wonderful reply, thank you so much. scorpio Thank you for the read and nice coment. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Seymour, this is very true, dearest friend, and that is perhaps why children ever so much change their minds on their dreams as they grow as they gain wisdom and only the most earnest dreams can come true! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, good morning, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend, always enjoy your eplies. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a good message here great write! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing Thanks for the read and reply. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
But luckily I woke the dream Before the end of luckless seem And I survived to dream again To this I say Amen, Amen. Dream your dreams and watch your lie Not all dreams are apple pie. Good Afternoon, Seymour Amen and Amen to this, sweet friend. Hugs Ethel |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
May you always be allowed to touch those things you see, you feel, you dream... Good Afternoon Sy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel LOL I very rarely tell about the bad ones. Barry, Like I said they are not all good. |
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