Open Poetry #29 |
All These Memories |
peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I don't have to hear your voice Just seeing your name I remember All those memories come rushing back And in that moment I am with you again I feel your lips press against mine As I softly kiss you goodnight How distinctly I feel your arms Holding me tight How sparks would ignite As you held me tight Your mouth changed under mine Those sparks jumped up hotter Kisses grew fiery, hands were aflame Suddenly goodnight was no longer our aim Our bodies strained to get even closer Gentle caresses grew a little bolder Soft loving sighs and murmurs escape Kisses that now blend together Hearts pounding next to each other I know in my soul forever will be All these memories are written Inside of me Pepper "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by peppermint35 (11-15-2003 02:43 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just seeing a name can really send you off into daydreams...I know |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lavenia~ This is just lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is precious, sweet friend, memories are precious and may you always arrange them gently in your hearts photo album, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lavenia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Lavenia, the hopeless romantic in me just LOVED this. It is so beautiful. I don't think I've read very much of your work, but I would love to see more of it. Thanks for sharing your memories with us. Hugs Ethel |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Pepper darling sister of my soul, YOU know how much I love this piece from you. Its not that it is just beautifully constructed and flows over my soul like a crystal stream of liquid light, and its not the beautiful placement of each word. No, what it is that makes this so incredible is the sheer beauty of you thoughts, and you heart shines so within each phrase. There are others who write, there are even others who write as well, but those who consistently produce such sparkling jewels of such class as you do, they are very few and far between. And this is a positive diamond of a poem, the memories the feeling it is just portrayed so perfectly. YOU beloved one are an outstanding and fabulous writer, yes I’m biased but darling one that bias doesn’t mean that your writing isn’t worth far more praise than I can give. YOU really and truly are an outstandingly talented writer and I’m proud to say this is my sister of heart, and by the way, isn’t she great. and forever Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds but I can face the future with courage brave and bold Footprints In My Heart Kethry [This message has been edited by Marsha (11-15-2003 07:44 PM).] |
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