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peppermint35
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0 posted 2003-11-15 02:09 AM


I don't have to hear your voice
Just seeing your name I remember
All those memories come rushing back
And in that moment I am with you again
I feel your lips press against mine
As I softly kiss you goodnight
How distinctly I feel your arms
Holding me tight
How sparks would ignite
As you held me tight
Your mouth changed under mine
Those sparks jumped up hotter
Kisses grew fiery, hands were aflame
Suddenly goodnight was no longer our aim
Our bodies strained to get even closer
Gentle caresses grew a little bolder
Soft loving sighs and murmurs escape
Kisses that now blend together
Hearts pounding next to each other
I know in my soul forever will be
All these memories are written
Inside of me


Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

[This message has been edited by peppermint35 (11-15-2003 02:43 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-11-15 02:47 AM


just seeing a name can really send you off into daydreams...I know
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2 posted 2003-11-15 02:39 PM


Lavenia~
This is just lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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3 posted 2003-11-15 03:05 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is precious, sweet friend, memories are precious and may you always arrange them gently in your hearts photo album, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lavenia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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4 posted 2003-11-15 03:09 PM


Oh Lavenia, the hopeless romantic in me just  LOVED this. It is so beautiful. I don't think I've read very much of your work, but I would love to see more of it. Thanks for sharing your memories with us.
Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-11-15 07:41 PM


Pepper darling sister of my soul, YOU know how much I love this piece from you. Its not that it is just beautifully constructed and flows over my soul like a crystal stream of liquid light, and its not the beautiful placement of each word. No, what it is that makes this so incredible is the sheer beauty of you thoughts, and you heart shines so within each phrase.

There are others who write, there are even others who write as well, but those who consistently produce such sparkling jewels of such class as you do, they are very few and far between. And this is a positive diamond of a poem, the memories the feeling it is just portrayed so perfectly.

YOU beloved one are an outstanding and fabulous writer, yes I’m biased but darling one that bias doesn’t mean that your writing isn’t worth far more praise than I can give. YOU really and truly are an outstandingly talented writer and I’m proud to say this is my sister of heart, and by the way, isn’t she great.  

Love you always
and forever
Mushy




Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry


[This message has been edited by Marsha (11-15-2003 07:44 PM).]

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