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Open Poetry #29

A Wedding Night

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2003-11-14 11:47 PM

listen to the vows
all society allows
innocence distilled

©2003 by icebox

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2003-11-15 10:11 AM

What? so far no replies?

Perhaps it is because
This haiku is like a hologram?
I must have crossed my eyes
The right way
Because the picture
shows clear in my vision..

nice work.....ice

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-11-15 10:37 AM

Thanks for bringing this up, ice.
Icebox? Thank YOU for the visual.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-11-15 12:18 PM

(sigh) There was something very holographic about this to me too, sweet friend, what's the point when vows are capable of being broken anyway, then we are nothing more than carbon-based! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, your poetry is so honest and open, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Magic Solias
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since 2003-11-08

Posts 73
California, USA

4 posted 2003-11-15 11:07 PM

Almost like a zen-koan

Magic Solias

"we dream to love and love to dream"

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

5 posted 2003-11-16 12:45 PM

"Innocence"?
Well, maybe . . .

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